Hi, well I read the fic and I have a couple of reviews. The first chapter I did not like. I felt very fake. As though everything is a great game for this girl Harry. I especially disliked the choice of dress and wig. The girls are real, and that Harry was so false, so hollow and empty. That Harry is a nice box, but there is nothing inside. That chapter, that girl is a great mount for me. It is a great contrast to the real girl the next chapter. That's where his story caught me. I enjoyed seeing this girl in the body of a man. I was able to understand and feel for this girl. And gods that weight, that hard, be this Harry. And sad to be so painfully resigned to his fate. I like Snape handles.That man so scary! And of course I want to read more. Maybe if you reconsider the first chapter, I think, would have more readers. After all we like stories that feel real. Greetings!
| Title: The Devil You Know
| 03 Jul 2014 6:25 am
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Wow. This is incredibly well-written and enjoyable to read. I can't wait til Snape finds out what's what.
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