Bravo!! Short and sweet, can't help but love stories like these!
Can't wait until you update One of Those Days -insert wink here-
| Title: Five: The Comfort
| 28 Mar 2016 2:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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Great story! I would love to see more if you decide to write a sequel. Thanks for sharing!
I actually cried when Harry said "I hate him!"
I'd love to see more :) Very well- written. Great characterization.
| Title: Five: The Comfort
| 03 Jul 2015 2:49 am
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| Reviewer: Elphaba (Anonymous)
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That. Was. Words that describe awesomeness. I don't expect to like short fics. (I prefer the huger 200,000 word ones) This blew me away. It was short and perfect. The only way it could be better is if there was a, cough, sequel.
I hope you continue the story. The interaction between Harry and Snape was such a change that it would be a shame not to continue it at some point. It would be hard for them to get along though with Snape's spying he has to act like he hates Harry. Harry would need to accept it which would be hard.
At least Harry is starting to calm down. Snape sounds shocked but as Head of House he has probably dealt with hysterical students on occasion.
At least Snape finally got through to Harry. Maybe he will take his occlumency lessons more seriously now.
I'm glad that Severus decided to punish Harry rather than losing his temper and throwing the jar at him. Harry went over the line and should have been punished. And Harry needed to hear the thing Snape was muttering. Maybe he will view Slytherin and Snape a little differently now.
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