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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Train 15 Dec 2014 12:22 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Good grief, but Harry's a mess.
    You've got me hooked.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! More chapters will be coming out now that I'm on break from school. :)
Title: The Train 31 Oct 2014 4:30 am
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    This is SO great!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Title: The Train 29 Oct 2014 9:51 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Seems like things have come to a head with Harry playing chicken with the train. You built the story up nicely, so that this was not completely out of left field. I like that someone is there with him, after, and that you've made just who that is a little mysterious.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I was trying to make it realistic. Harry sees the train and gets excited, the child in him coming out as the wonder of something so massive and neat speeds toward him. Before he can think, his body is taking him toward it and his motives change as he realizes that it could all be over in a second. But he doesn't give up.

     

    Anyway, that was my thought process. Thanks for reading!

Title: The Train 28 Oct 2014 5:40 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it! I love how Snape notices the nuances in Harry's behavior! I can't wait for the next installment.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading!!
Title: The Train 27 Oct 2014 1:36 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you will update again soon.
    And the feelings are really well written end realistic.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will be back at it ASAP :)
Title: The Train 26 Oct 2014 10:38 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    You can say that again. :)
Title: The Train 24 Oct 2014 7:11 pm
Reviewer: ForTheLoveOfHippogriffs (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is brilliant so far!!! I am really enjoying how descriptive you are, and the emotions are so well written that it makes it incredibly believable! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: I am very glad that you are enjoying it. Thank you!
Title: The Train 24 Oct 2014 12:30 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very intense and well done thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: The Train 23 Oct 2014 3:14 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sighs in relief* oh my god i almost had a heat attack reading this chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It was definitely an intense one! 
Title: The Train 22 Oct 2014 8:06 am
Reviewer: nine (Signed) [Report This]
    chapters seem a little short. Could you maybe flesh some of this out more. You've packed lots of conflict in each chapter so far, but not really built up any context by the way of character (is harry depressed, or numb--as the title implies--two very different states, for example)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the honest feedback! I agree about chapter length. I'm afraid to say that amidst being so busy I have used this story as a place to let things out. The next chapters will definitely be longer. As far as Harry is concerned, he is both depressed and numb at times. The story picks up at a time when a devastating event (Sirius' death) has occurred and emotions once repressed, as well as grief, are surfacing. This is why he is sometimes okay, sometimes feels nothing, and is sometimes in turmoil.

     

    I hope the next chapter flushes things out. Please let me know, and thank you again!


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