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Reviews For Not all who wander are lost
You've got me hooked. Author's Response: Thanks so much! More chapters will be coming out now that I'm on break from school. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying to make it realistic. Harry sees the train and gets excited, the child in him coming out as the wonder of something so massive and neat speeds toward him. Before he can think, his body is taking him toward it and his motives change as he realizes that it could all be over in a second. But he doesn't give up.
Anyway, that was my thought process. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!!
And the feelings are really well written end realistic. Author's Response: Thank you! I will be back at it ASAP :)
Author's Response: I am very glad that you are enjoying it. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It was definitely an intense one!
Author's Response: Thank you for the honest feedback! I agree about chapter length. I'm afraid to say that amidst being so busy I have used this story as a place to let things out. The next chapters will definitely be longer. As far as Harry is concerned, he is both depressed and numb at times. The story picks up at a time when a devastating event (Sirius' death) has occurred and emotions once repressed, as well as grief, are surfacing. This is why he is sometimes okay, sometimes feels nothing, and is sometimes in turmoil.
I hope the next chapter flushes things out. Please let me know, and thank you again! |
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