Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Train 28 Oct 2014 5:40 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it! I love how Snape notices the nuances in Harry's behavior! I can't wait for the next installment.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading!!
Title: The Train 27 Oct 2014 1:36 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you will update again soon.
    And the feelings are really well written end realistic.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will be back at it ASAP :)
Title: The Train 26 Oct 2014 10:38 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    You can say that again. :)
Title: The Train 24 Oct 2014 7:11 pm
Reviewer: ForTheLoveOfHippogriffs (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is brilliant so far!!! I am really enjoying how descriptive you are, and the emotions are so well written that it makes it incredibly believable! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: I am very glad that you are enjoying it. Thank you!
Title: The Train 24 Oct 2014 12:30 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very intense and well done thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: The Train 23 Oct 2014 3:14 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sighs in relief* oh my god i almost had a heat attack reading this chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It was definitely an intense one! 
Title: The Train 22 Oct 2014 8:06 am
Reviewer: nine (Signed) [Report This]
    chapters seem a little short. Could you maybe flesh some of this out more. You've packed lots of conflict in each chapter so far, but not really built up any context by the way of character (is harry depressed, or numb--as the title implies--two very different states, for example)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the honest feedback! I agree about chapter length. I'm afraid to say that amidst being so busy I have used this story as a place to let things out. The next chapters will definitely be longer. As far as Harry is concerned, he is both depressed and numb at times. The story picks up at a time when a devastating event (Sirius' death) has occurred and emotions once repressed, as well as grief, are surfacing. This is why he is sometimes okay, sometimes feels nothing, and is sometimes in turmoil.

     

    I hope the next chapter flushes things out. Please let me know, and thank you again!

Title: Defence Against the Dark Arts 20 Oct 2014 10:21 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    and your doing great at keeping them in character as much as possible. men are just so stubborn and hard headed.
Title: Defence Against the Dark Arts 20 Oct 2014 2:57 am
Reviewer: bianca_slate (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic blow up! I can hardly wait to see how Severus handles Harry's hints about the Dursleys. I don't expect Severus will let Harry just run off with a mincemeat hand.

    I've always thought Minerva too old to handle school children. Teens, yes, she steers them in the right direction, and seems to acknowledge they have hormones. But kids like Harry, his first three years - sheesh! He DID go to her for help and only got platitudes, and told it was none of his business. And when he went to tell her about Umbridge and she advised him to keep his head down, I lost even more respect for her. She seemed to be training her students that it is better to ask for forgiveness after having done something than to ask permission or help ahead of time.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I agree with your insight regarding Minerva. Thanks for reading :)
Title: Defence Against the Dark Arts 19 Oct 2014 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good angst in this chapter thank you so much!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Hopefully there will be some comfort happening in a couple of chapters. We will see :)

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