| Title: Chapter 4
| 03 Dec 2014 12:18 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the bath and the temper tantrum! You have convinced me that a good Bella is possible thank you
Bad Dumbles and Potter. Can we just get rid of them?
Severus certainly taught Harry a lesson. Maybe he won't be as naughty to Sev in the future. The bond between Severus, Lily and Bellatrix is an interesting twist. That should come in handy in the upcoming war.
I was glad that you mentioned what each of the trio was doing, job-wise after graduation. The incident at the house must have done some real damage to the Order of the Phoenix. Potter certainly stepped in it that time. Hopefully, someone will rein him in. I was glad that Bellatrix and Severus call Harrison, Harry sometimes. I am having trouble thinking of Harry as Harrison.
I am really enjoying your story. I've never read one with a theme like this. The more stable Bellatrix is a fun character, Lily still has a temper and who can resist Severus? The end of the chapter came as a shock though. Looking forward to the next chapter.
That was an interesting first chapter. The way the three met made sense. After all if probably isn't easy to find magical children to play with and Bellatrix seems like the type that would enjoy escaping from her house elf nanny. The blood bonding was a fun scene and something that kids would do. I had a blood sister at that age. I really like the various wands and familiars. The sorting should be interesting, too.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 10 Nov 2014 12:20 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dramatic and well written thank you
| Title: Chapter 2
| 10 Nov 2014 12:00 am
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| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Nov 2014 11:29 pm
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Lovely idea and content thank you
Oh wow. What's going on now? This story keeps being inventive, adding more and more.
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