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Title: Endings and Beginnings 09 Mar 2015 10:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent start to the story
Title: Endings and Beginnings 20 Dec 2014 10:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start to the story thank you
Title: Endings and Beginnings 16 Dec 2014 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Elvira Slytherin (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's rebellious thoughts are fantastic! He's very strong for going through the abuse and still remaining such a kind-hearted person but his comments showed that he's witty as well. Your characterizaton of Harry is excellently done.

    The pace was a little on the slow side but it helps build the anticipation for his encounter with Snape.

    The idea of the Dursleys moving to Snape's neighborhood is very original! I'm definitely looking forward to see how this will continue.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm glad you like Harry's rebellious side. I think it's something that many writers forget- Harry is a snarky little bastard! 

     

    Personally, I favor slow-paced fics. I expect that I'll pick up the pace on some things, though. These first chapters are all about foreshadowing and setting up the rest of the story. The payoffs will be worth it. <3

     

    You have the challenger to thank for the original idea! Thanks for the review! 

Title: Endings and Beginnings 16 Dec 2014 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! I'm so glad you decided to answer the challenge! Whoo!
Title: Endings and Beginnings 16 Dec 2014 8:14 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm assuming that, along with an AU rating, it's also set during different years? That's the only way Harry would be in the second year during '95, which is when the first Pokemon came out. Except for that glaring fact, nothing out of place and no errors. Hopefully future chapters will give years to them.

    Author's Response: I was never a Pokemon fan myself, so I had no idea. Nah, it's still '92 in this fic. If I can think of a replacement, I'll edit it in, but since it'll likely never be mentioned again I'm not going to stress about it. Thanks for the review! 

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