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Reviews For I've Always Wanted a Neighbour Just Like You
The only thing that seemed off was how little Harry was able to drink. Surely it is easy to get some from the tap as he is unpacking? I love the music box and the descriptions of the house and Hedwig. Poor Harry is probably starving by now. Thanks so much for sharing this story! Author's Response: Thank you! And at least the Weasleys tried. It's the thought that counts. Thanks for telling me! I'll go back and reread this chapter. I'm afraid I might have made things a little too harsh. I thought I included Harry getting water from the tap, but if not I can go back and edit and make things cleaer. The music box was thought up by my beta because I was having trouble thinking of a memento from Lily. Team effort! And I'm glad you like my descriptions. You'll find all sorts of things if you pay attention to the details, though it may not be obvious until later. ;) |
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