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Title: The Pudding Fiasco 16 Dec 2014 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Abie (Signed) [Report This]
    I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of this story. Good fics are hard to come by. This is really well-written and original, and I look forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you! It's great to hear that my writing is quality. I owe part of that to my Beta, who catches my silly mistakes. 
Title: The Pudding Fiasco 16 Dec 2014 5:15 pm
Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed) [Report This]
    Just a lovely story. :).
Title: The Pudding Fiasco 16 Dec 2014 3:18 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. This is awesome so far! I love it! Everyone is spot on! I love how Snape gave Dudley a mop! He was probably completely baffled by it. I wonder if Snape is starting to piece together Harry's living arrangement and treatment at the hands of the Dursleys'.Fantastic story, thanks for all the chapters! Please update when you can!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I've always considered getting into character a specialty of mine, and I'm glad it's showing! I almost gave Harry the mop, but giving it to Dudley was too good of an opportunity to pass up. 

    As for Snape, well, you'll just have to wait and see.  

Title: The Curious Case of Empty Number 4 16 Dec 2014 2:59 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Awesome chapter! I absolutely adore you Hedwig and Snape! Fantastic characterizations!
Title: The Pudding Fiasco 16 Dec 2014 2:56 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely written story so far. I hope you have frequent updates.
Title: Treasures Untold 16 Dec 2014 2:40 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! Awesome chapter I am loving this story! Loved the ending. I wonder if Dumbledore knows where Harry is. Too bad the Weasleys couldn't find and rescue Harry this time!

    The only thing that seemed off was how little Harry was able to drink. Surely it is easy to get some from the tap as he is unpacking?

    I love the music box and the descriptions of the house and Hedwig. Poor Harry is probably starving by now. Thanks so much for sharing this story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! And at least the Weasleys tried. It's the thought that counts. 

    Thanks for telling me! I'll go back and reread this chapter. I'm afraid I might have made things a little too harsh. I thought I included Harry getting water from the tap, but if not I can go back and edit and make things cleaer. 

    The music box was thought up by my beta because I was having trouble thinking of a memento from Lily. Team effort! And I'm glad you like my descriptions. You'll find all sorts of things if you pay attention to the details, though it may not be obvious until later. ;)

Title: Endings and Beginnings 16 Dec 2014 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! I'm so glad you decided to answer the challenge! Whoo!
Title: The Pudding Fiasco 16 Dec 2014 1:33 pm
Reviewer: TabbiD (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start. I especially like how the Dursley's are not over the top abusive as they are in some stories. Honestly, they're abusive enough in canon! I'm excited to see where you go with this.

    Author's Response:

    I have to agree with you- the Dursleys are terrible people! It's also sort of a challenge to myself, and something I really wanted to do. There are lots of stories that feature physically abusive Dursleys, and some stories do it very well. What I wanted to see more is emotional and verbal abuse. They're just as harmful as physical abuse, and perhaps even more dangerous because there aren't any outward signs like bruises, so it's easily missed. 

    It's a very personal topic to me, and I'm glad to see that the interactions between Dursleys and Harry are well-recieved.  

Title: The Pudding Fiasco 16 Dec 2014 11:10 am
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    This is good!! Can't wait to see where you go with it :)

    Author's Response: Trust me, you're not the only one who is wondering where this is going! I have some vague plans, but for the most part this story is writing itself and I'm along for the ride, lol. Thanks for the review! 
Title: Endings and Beginnings 16 Dec 2014 8:14 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm assuming that, along with an AU rating, it's also set during different years? That's the only way Harry would be in the second year during '95, which is when the first Pokemon came out. Except for that glaring fact, nothing out of place and no errors. Hopefully future chapters will give years to them.

    Author's Response: I was never a Pokemon fan myself, so I had no idea. Nah, it's still '92 in this fic. If I can think of a replacement, I'll edit it in, but since it'll likely never be mentioned again I'm not going to stress about it. Thanks for the review! 

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