| Title: Chapter 1
| 23 Feb 2015 10:13 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This is a great start and I do think it will work, however, there are a lot of grammar mistakes. I know you said that you don't want to use a beta but the amount of mistakes does take away from the story. Please don't think that I'm flaming, I'm just trying to offer advice.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The story just might not be for you then, as I won't be getting a beta. I've read other stories with grammer worse then mine, and for me it hasn't taken away from the story. Now if it was poorly written that would be different. I'll try to catch most of the mistakes but other then that I'm sticking with my plan.