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Title: Chapter 2 18 Oct 2016 3:13 am
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh drat - Of course AD, PP get to Force Severus to give too much - with guilt and no gratefulnes- Isn't it the rule that the Slytherin scapegoat is always overworked, No one defends his rights, Lets just stamp on him. And he has to take three,three! damaged children. Instead of sharing the work between them all. or setting up a rota. They have Magic and House-elves.
    I am furious on Severus' behalf.
    To be an exhausted caretaker does not help the vulnerable young 'uns; or Severus himself.
    His heart is in the right place. Poppy and Albus are just ducking their responsabilites -Albus epecially needs to learn the unselfishness caring for a child would teach him -the blind goat. He should help SS, firstly by explaining the situation to Harry's friends. they hate SS and doubt him which is not needed. PP should help SS by being a
    'call and I'll come night or day' babysitter.
    No wonder our Potions Master was so disillusioned by his 'friends? and colleagues? Voldemort was at least an honest enemy.' Poor chap.

    Author's Response: It'll get better, Severus needs their love just as much as they need his.
Title: Chapter 2 05 Mar 2015 12:31 pm
Reviewer: Sevvus (Signed) [Report This]
    aww man Im so into it too..Please update soon!!

    Author's Response: I update every week, so keep a look out! I'm so glad I've gained a new fan, thanks for the review it gives me motivation!
Title: Chapter 2 02 Mar 2015 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter and the children. Draco was so innocent and unspoilt and of course Harry is a sweetheart thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks! I know, gotta love that blomde Slytherin I just hope he can stay that way. After all, he's uses to getting everything he's ever wanted.
Title: Chapter 2 01 Mar 2015 11:37 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    yay! I'm happy to see a new chapter.

    I love the kiddy language :-) I also laughed when Draco actually shared something. What a 180 degree turn in his personality.

    IMHO DD was let off the hook too easily and quickly. But i guess there wasn't anything to gain by drawing it out. But DD DID know about Harry at least. He just purposefully ignored it because it was easier for HIM. He really does fail as a headmaster, especially preventing physicals for the students. That 101 stuff.

    I'm not so sure Severus is up to the task. DD's assurances don't really mean much do they? I fear for Harry and Neville. I don't think he can be fair and equal at this point.

    LOL, but then we wouldn't have this story would we?

    Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    I'm so happy to see a new review, they make me update faster. Since the great response last chapter I'm hoping to update every Sunday or Monday so keep a look out! :)

     

    I'm so glad, I wonder if you noticed the difference in between their language though. Its so fun to write ad a kid, everything is just awesome and big lol. Good, toddler Draco is going to rewrite a few things for himself, starting with Poppy and Albus.I have some plans and he fits the bill.

     

    He was, but I couldn't continue with really hitting some hard blows to Albus. I'm mostly indifferent to Albus Dumbledore in my honest opinon I feel he did wrong by Tom, Sev, Sirius and Harry and I cannot let that go or forgive him for it. Its a delicate process when I write him as I have to try hard not to bash him. Though don't think for a moment he got off so easy...Minerva still needs to be informed lol.

     Personally I don't think Sev is up to the task either, he didn't even want to take them. He was guilted into it, I see him ,taking a lot of mistakes, but I also see Draco amd Neville not allowing for that. At this moment Harry needs protecters and I can see Draco and Neville doing that. Neville is an interesting character, the way he was in first year he would have never survived his Gran and Uncle if he was that timid. I think an incident brought that forth and so at five he's different. He's a Gryffindor even if he doesn't always show it.

     

    Stick around for more though, and always review! Its been enlightening! 

Title: Chapter 2 01 Mar 2015 8:45 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter

    Author's Response: So glad you liked it, I read every review and its motivated me to keep on track with my stories. Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 2 01 Mar 2015 2:59 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Really good second chapter. You've even managed to sell me the idea that Draco was a nice child before Lucius took charge of his upbringing. Thanks for not making Albus evil, just misguided or unobservant. I'm glad that Severus has been persuaded to do the right thing for all the boys; he's surely going to do a good job over Christmas. Looking forward to seeing how things go.

    Author's Response:

    Well it was just that little instance in the last book, when Draco realized his father being a death eater wasn't all fun and games. And then when Narcissa took him away from the fight, she loved her son ya know? I figured Lucius didn't care in the early years but once he could mold Draco t be his mini me he did. So that little bit was hidden away, I always hated that with all the Slytherins.

     

    They didnt come out the womb jerks. And as for Albus, I can never agree on his character. Some days I really hate him for what he did to Tom, Sev and Harry. And other days I adore him for trying ..even though he failed. Most days I'm indfifferent to him and neither like or dislike him. But I also know he had a good heart, definitly misguided and ignorant but I know he meant good at least I hope so. I have a plan for Albus so he can begin to fix his mistakes.  I'm so glad you liked it, Sev is in way OVER his head.

Title: Chapter 2 01 Mar 2015 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Sprite (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic!

    Author's Response: Thanks that means a lot, Stay tuned and keep reviewing!

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