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Reviews For A Chance at Love
I am furious on Severus' behalf. To be an exhausted caretaker does not help the vulnerable young 'uns; or Severus himself. His heart is in the right place. Poppy and Albus are just ducking their responsabilites -Albus epecially needs to learn the unselfishness caring for a child would teach him -the blind goat. He should help SS, firstly by explaining the situation to Harry's friends. they hate SS and doubt him which is not needed. PP should help SS by being a 'call and I'll come night or day' babysitter. No wonder our Potions Master was so disillusioned by his 'friends? and colleagues? Voldemort was at least an honest enemy.' Poor chap. Author's Response: It'll get better, Severus needs their love just as much as they need his.
Author's Response: I update every week, so keep a look out! I'm so glad I've gained a new fan, thanks for the review it gives me motivation!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know, gotta love that blomde Slytherin I just hope he can stay that way. After all, he's uses to getting everything he's ever wanted.
I love the kiddy language :-) I also laughed when Draco actually shared something. What a 180 degree turn in his personality. IMHO DD was let off the hook too easily and quickly. But i guess there wasn't anything to gain by drawing it out. But DD DID know about Harry at least. He just purposefully ignored it because it was easier for HIM. He really does fail as a headmaster, especially preventing physicals for the students. That 101 stuff. I'm not so sure Severus is up to the task. DD's assurances don't really mean much do they? I fear for Harry and Neville. I don't think he can be fair and equal at this point. LOL, but then we wouldn't have this story would we? Can't wait for more! Author's Response: I'm so happy to see a new review, they make me update faster. Since the great response last chapter I'm hoping to update every Sunday or Monday so keep a look out! :)
I'm so glad, I wonder if you noticed the difference in between their language though. Its so fun to write ad a kid, everything is just awesome and big lol. Good, toddler Draco is going to rewrite a few things for himself, starting with Poppy and Albus.I have some plans and he fits the bill.
He was, but I couldn't continue with really hitting some hard blows to Albus. I'm mostly indifferent to Albus Dumbledore in my honest opinon I feel he did wrong by Tom, Sev, Sirius and Harry and I cannot let that go or forgive him for it. Its a delicate process when I write him as I have to try hard not to bash him. Though don't think for a moment he got off so easy...Minerva still needs to be informed lol. Personally I don't think Sev is up to the task either, he didn't even want to take them. He was guilted into it, I see him ,taking a lot of mistakes, but I also see Draco amd Neville not allowing for that. At this moment Harry needs protecters and I can see Draco and Neville doing that. Neville is an interesting character, the way he was in first year he would have never survived his Gran and Uncle if he was that timid. I think an incident brought that forth and so at five he's different. He's a Gryffindor even if he doesn't always show it.
Stick around for more though, and always review! Its been enlightening!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it, I read every review and its motivated me to keep on track with my stories. Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Well it was just that little instance in the last book, when Draco realized his father being a death eater wasn't all fun and games. And then when Narcissa took him away from the fight, she loved her son ya know? I figured Lucius didn't care in the early years but once he could mold Draco t be his mini me he did. So that little bit was hidden away, I always hated that with all the Slytherins.
They didnt come out the womb jerks. And as for Albus, I can never agree on his character. Some days I really hate him for what he did to Tom, Sev and Harry. And other days I adore him for trying ..even though he failed. Most days I'm indfifferent to him and neither like or dislike him. But I also know he had a good heart, definitly misguided and ignorant but I know he meant good at least I hope so. I have a plan for Albus so he can begin to fix his mistakes. I'm so glad you liked it, Sev is in way OVER his head.
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