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Title: Chapter 6 05 Apr 2015 5:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it especially how you are developing each boy's character thank you so much
Title: Chapter 6 04 Apr 2015 6:07 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Remus fitted in surprisingly well, so that should (maybe) make the shopping trip stress free all round. Had to laugh at Severus' determination to take charge of Harry. So, Neville has a special gift as well as his Gryffindor courage to stand up to Severus. Interesting.
Title: Chapter 6 03 Apr 2015 9:52 pm
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story! Hope you'll update soon!

    Author's Response: I update weekly, that is the best I can do.
Title: Chapter 6 02 Apr 2015 9:17 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay no matter how long you make your chapters they are just way too short! Ever time I reach the end of the chapter I am still left wanting more. Great Chapter.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way, I honestly feel like I'm dragging the story along lol. That definitly makes me feel better. I'm so greatful for your input! 
Title: Chapter 6 02 Apr 2015 5:10 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    A very interesting skill Neville has demonstrated. It's so very in line with his reticent and reserved manner... after all, it would be scary and confusing to constantly be "feeling" things about people when their words and actions might be at odds. Especially in one so young and in such a hostile environment he's grown up in. I'm also happy Neville is the one with a special and unique talent, not Harry. IDK why, I just am.

    I totally give a pass to Severus on the Mr Longbottom thing. My impression is that it was totally non-intentional. Just falling back into old patterns.

    I'm happy for this update and look forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Indeed, it fits him totally.  You're not the only one, when I first started writing this chapter, it was always Neville, it didn't think of me to make it Harry. That little boy has his own special power without being aware of it, his ability to forgive and move on. I know it doesnt seem like much but with the way he was abused he is the perfect one to help Severus, especially since we know how Severus rejects help of any kind. I can just imagine how spooked Moony would be though when Neville said that lol.

    Good, because it wasn't intentional at all. Unlike with Harry he hadn't been saying the last name with venom and as Neville himself wasnt saying anything he didn't have a reason to really know, you know?

     I'm so glad you're loving the story! Your review and support means alot!

Title: Chapter 6 02 Apr 2015 12:28 pm
Reviewer: karisma (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it more now that Remus has joined the merry crowd of toddlers and teachers!

    Author's Response: Well I can tell someone is a Remus fan too! I just feel like it would be even now 3 adults, and 3 toddlers. Each child is garanteed attention especially Draco. We know how can be!
Title: Chapter 6 02 Apr 2015 11:24 am
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like you stroy more, and more :)
    And I like the way, how Severus is dealing with boys. I really hope, that his attitude towards "Mr Longbottom" was only a mistake. Because I was also wondering, whay is that Severus calls Neville by last name... BTW, is Neville a Seer or something? That he sees more?

    That's so great,that you freed Sirius of all charges and so swiftly (almost improbably fast). But I hope that this won't change anything between Severus and Harry.

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you do!

     It was a mistake, he didn't realize what exactly he was doing. It was a reflex, he did it intentionally and since it was never brought to his attention, since he never addressed the name with Hate like he did the name Potter it didn't register to either him or Albus. Neville is not a Seer, but he is something..It's not that he sees something...he does feel it though..did you guess it?

     

    I freed Sirius because I didnt want him suffering and he's not coming into the story just yet, its' only been like day 2 of winter break, Severus and Harry hasn't fully bonded yet. He's not been cleared by the healers to see Remus let alone interact with children. Not to worry,I have a plan for Sirius, but he's not coming as of yet. 


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