| Title: Chapter 9
| 09 Jun 2015 6:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenixsong (Anonymous)
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Yay! I was so happy for the update. I really enjoyed the chapter and hope that maybe Lupin and Neville will get to be happier / have more fun in future chapters. I want to see everyone get their happy ever after :). Looking forward to more updates in the fall.
Author's Response: So glad you're a reader, I'm working on the next chapter i have so many ideas for this story
| Title: Chapter 9
| 09 Jun 2015 6:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenixsong (Anonymous)
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Yay! I was so happy for the update. I really enjoyed the chapter and hope that maybe Lupin and Neville will get to be happier / have more fun in future chapters. I want to see everyone get their happy ever after :). Looking forward to more updates in the fall.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 09 Jun 2015 5:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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"Remus heard the child sigh and frowned as he watched the boy's expression. It hurt his own heart as he himself had often had a similar one on his face when he had been a child, longing. He said nothing as they watched Severus climb on the structure."
So Remus sees that Neville is unhappy, yet doesn't do anything?!? Come on Remus! Comfort the child! It seems to me like each child has their adult, but Remus is ignoring Neville a bit. I know Harry is his special cub, but Neville badly needs an adult to look out for him and love him.
Author's Response: They do, I have a storyline for all of them. Remus is stubborn, most Gryffindors are, that being said so is Neville. At the moment Neville wants Severus's affection that he has for Harry, whose to say Neville wouldn't have pushed him away if Remus tried to comfort him? Until Remus comes to terms with the whole situation they will both suffer, Neville moreso unfortunatly.
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