| Title: Chapter 15
| 26 Oct 2016 8:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter poor Neville!
Glad they worked together to rescue Harry in time. Good to see Severus and Sirius making an effort to be civil as well, and nice that Harry is friends with Draco again. But whats going on with Neville? I do hope things work out well for him too.
Poor Neville. I don't think I could handle having his gift. It'd drive crazy.
While the visions will make it easier for Neville to integrate back into his adult(ish) body... all the progress made in this black/white world with grey information will make things stall, if not worsen, in the meanwhile. Poor Neville, while he's not the example of 'worst' or 'best', he's just constantly stuck in that 'second' position. That middling ground that is so easy to become invisible in, even when you don't want to be. And every time that progress is made, something happens to shove him back into that position. In a way, it's a good thing that he's a bit passive... but there's being passive and then there's letting yourself getting trod over. Not even with Remus, he gets a true one-on-one connection, he has to share everyone.
Author's Response: I promise you, Neville will get his happy ending. I swear it, he won't always be second best. He deserves to be loved as well.
Poor Neville. Somehow, someone needs to get him to stop making assumptions about people's feelings and motives. They are more complex that a five year old Neville can interpret.
Author's Response: They are indeed, but he's not being very forecoming in what he's feeling. Lol
wondering what its mean- since neville has flashback ? great chapie..
Whoop! Amazing chapter as always
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