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Title: Chapter 4 15 Mar 2015 4:51 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for a lovely long chapter, although I still seemed to reach the end too quickly. There are glimmers of hope that Severus will do a good job with the boys, but no doubt here will be problems along the way. Remus as a helper? Could be interesting if Severus goes for that option.

    Author's Response: That is how it tends to go lol, I like Remus I think Sev might need some Help at times and I know once Poppy tells Albus that, he'll start meddling, what else? lol Sev may not have a choice, or the choice could be made for him..so many options 
Title: Chapter 1 15 Mar 2015 1:16 am
Reviewer: marauderstone (Signed) [Report This]
    This is pretty good! I have to keep reading
Title: Chapter 4 14 Mar 2015 6:03 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter!

    You've really done a great job in capturing some important, but hard to define, mental pathways that Severus must get rid of and why. From realizing he needs help in caring for three toddlers to curbing his instinctive tone of voice towards "Potters". The "ah ha" moment Severus has with regards to Harry giving up on people was poignant.

    I can't wait for more! This is definitely one of the best de-aging and Severus-as-a-parental figure out there. You're not glossing over the things that make these sorts of stories realistic - like trust is not just freely given towards authority figures when a kid has been abused. They have to earn in the hard way. Day by day. For every two steps forward, there will be one step back and they can't ever loose their patience or it will all be lost.

    Well done!

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

     

    Severus does learn, he's just stubborn, and while he's given up for the moment of Potter...he still has a way to go in regards to Neville. I love that I have you a reader, your review is awesome. Directly the point I was trying to make. I have seen alot of stories(including some of my own) where Harry trusts him automatically. I didn't want one of those right now, and with kids being unpredicatable it has come a long way. Thanks for coming along for the ride. 

Title: Chapter 4 14 Mar 2015 2:25 pm
Reviewer: karisma (Signed) [Report This]
    Who could send you flames for this? It's SO SWEET! Tears gushing down my face-sweet! I love it!

    Author's Response: People send flames all the time for no reason other then because the internet makes then anonymous. I prepare myself for flames when I write that so it can role off. I love that you loved it! Reviews like that makes me type even faster!
Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2015 10:27 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I love these little boys. I hope if they revert back to their true age that they keep their memories of this time. I just want to hug and hold all of them

    Author's Response: Well if they didn't keep the memories, it would be a sad christmas story lol..and we can't have that!
Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2015 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Abbey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story
Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2015 11:37 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I really, really like how you are handling this idea, and building on the children's revelations and the 'what ifs'. I'm keen to see how Severus gets on with them in his home. If Poppy is struggling to cope it doesn't look good, although at least it sounds as if he has elves to help. I do hope he doesn't come down too hard on the 3 though, they really need him to handle the situation in a good way.
Title: Chapter 3 09 Mar 2015 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixsong (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story! I continue to enjoy how the three boys are portrayed and how their personalities contrast but still compliment each other. Can't wait to see what happens when they settle in with Severus

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you think so and i'm SO happy you liked it. Thanks for the review! Poor Severus, he doesn't know what's coming! 

Title: Chapter 3 09 Mar 2015 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Nani (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this story is so sweet! Good job! I can't wait to read more

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And I'm so glad your enjoying yourself, until next week!
Title: Chapter 3 09 Mar 2015 9:43 pm
Reviewer: pandora5002002 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your story. I find the combination of Harry, Draco and Neville at this age rather cute. Will you let Lucius, Augusta and the Dursley play a part personally or only in retrospective?

    Author's Response: Yeah most 5 year olds are adorable, these cuties only add to it. Lucius isn't a villian well he is but not to his child, he loved his child he just molded him into the perfect copy of himself and then you have Mini Malfoy. I'm not sure if he will be prominent in the story, however I do know that Augusta will be featured somewhere along, and that's all I can say. Dursely....has yet to be determined.

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