like that harry had a memory of his parents and uncle remus! like there was a trial on harry's relatives and neville's grandmother and his great uncle! like the scene concerning albus' s beard and the boys-such a sweet and touching scene!!
Title: Chapter 13
| 03 Mar 2016 10:26 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the beard idea and the whole chapter thank you
Well, if you struggled with this chapter it didn't notice. Love wise little Neville. Here's hoping the boys all enjoy Christmas as much as Albus will.
Author's Response: Yeah Christmas is gonna so fun, and dramatic lol. Thanks!
I want to feel his beard!!!! :)
Author's Response: Me too!
Loved the update! When will we get to see a confrontation with Sirius?
Author's Response: Shh....I think mostly everyone had forgotten about that, even with Remus quickly leaving. I don't want to ruin their Christmas so I will tell you the day after Christmas is when stuff hits the fan regarding him. So not this upcoming chapter but the one after it, as I feel Christmas might need a whole chapter to itself!
I was so excited to see an update and I can't wait to read about their Christmas. I'm also very curious to see what happens when they re-age. Who will Neville stay with?
Author's Response: I have that figured out already would you believe? lol. It'll be someone nice, but you have to wait and see!
I loved the bit with the beard--brought a tear to my eye.
Author's Response: Yeah when I was writing it, I got a bit a choked up myself but I just thought I was being emotional lol. I'm so glad of your response, thats exactly what Albus was feeling!
like the interaction between the boys, albus, remus and severus.. even love that fact albus is in a grandfather role, while the other in the uncles' role!
know that boys will enjoyed the holiday with severus! especially harry and neville, since had a diffcult childhood, when their were younger...
Lovely long chapter. (Sorry, but I had to laugh at the first paragraph - sunshine at 6.45am in England in December? No chance!! Perhaps it was a magical window.:-D). The boys were so funny in the swearing scene, and in not wanting to miss out on anything. They're going to sleep well after such an exciting day! I hope Remus makes the most of his extra chance, and I look forward to finding out what gifts everyone bought.
Author's Response: Yeah I thinking it was a magical window, England isnt really known for it's sun in the summer. I should have specified lol
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