Great start. Definitely worth continuing. Wonder if Father will show up this time?!
Title: Mr. Dursley, I presume?
| 03 Apr 2015 7:54 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Great story! A very new take on it. I'm excited to see where you are going to take this. Hope you update frequently!
Title: Mr. Dursley, I presume?
| 03 Apr 2015 1:43 pm
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Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous)
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An excellent start, this story is definitely worth continuing, it is well written and I really like the idea of Severus looking out for Harry.
I love how Harry calls Severus 'Father' as well, I have always imagined Severus to be quite a formal parent, so the 'Father' fits well, I think.
I hope you update again soon, I can't wait to see if Severus rescues Harry, I hope he does though!
i like this story, its very well written
Title: Mr. Dursley, I presume?
| 03 Apr 2015 9:19 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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WOW! Fantastic premise! I absolutely love it! The interactions between Harry and Snape are perfect! I am loving this story!!
Title: Mr. Dursley, I presume?
| 03 Apr 2015 1:32 am
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Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed)
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definitely worth continuing!
I hope you continue. I'd hate for poor Harry to be stuck under Dennis and not rescued. ;) I like that Severus is keeping an eye on Harry and making sure his physical needs are being met, at least. Looking forward to more.
Title: Mr. Dursley, I presume?
| 02 Apr 2015 8:52 pm
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Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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great beginning and yes please continue
Title: Mr. Dursley, I presume?
| 02 Apr 2015 8:45 pm
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Reviewer: C (Anonymous)
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A good start, would definitely read future updates
Title: Mr. Dursley, I presume?
| 02 Apr 2015 7:25 pm
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Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed)
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