YESSS! YES SEVERUS YES!
I'm literally in tears right now haha. Reading up until those last two parts was torture! For a second I honestly thought Sev would leave poor Harry again!
Harry is so freaking cute! He's so desperate and Severus teasing him by showing up and then leaving... agh! I'm just happy Severus is taking him. God, if Albus makes a big deal, I might explode. Hopefully Minerva will step in!
Update soon!
| Title: Come here, Harry.
| 16 Apr 2015 8:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I don't appro of corporal punishment but this was a wonderful chapter thank you so much!
Wow!!
Me encanta, que relación tan compleja
maravilloso capítulo
me enamoro bastante, el argumento de Severus
Author's Response: Gracias!! Y gracias por el español - es buen practica para mi!
| Title: Come here, Harry.
| 15 Apr 2015 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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wonderful but my heart is going out to poor Harry
Amazing update! :) Very different from your previous series - this time Harry is nice and Snape isn't!
Also, I love your idea of Snape looking after Harry from afar, it's so sweet! I cannot wait to see where you take this - please update soon.
| Title: Come here, Harry.
| 15 Apr 2015 5:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I absolutely love it so far, and I can't wait for more!
| Title: Come here, Harry.
| 15 Apr 2015 3:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! So good. I am loving this story. Its such a new take and you are doing a beautiful job in writing it. I don't think I can wait for an update. I need the next chapter now!! Hahaha. Really, excellent story. Can't wait for more
| Title: Come here, Harry.
| 15 Apr 2015 11:38 am
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| Reviewer: waha (Anonymous)
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waw. I really like your story. I wonder if Snape is going to let harry remembers him when he'll go to Hogwart.
| Title: Come here, Harry.
| 15 Apr 2015 6:38 am
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| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed)
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Ahh all the feels for little Harry... No one can blame him for trying to get his fathers attention like that.
I hope that Severus realizes that his way of caring for Harry won't be enough on the long run.
And for those who said that the spanking was too much:
I got disciplined like that back when I was a child (I am now 22 years old) and even though I think that Snape was a bit harsh I do not think that he was way too hard on Harry.
Snape himself said that he was angry and I bet he was even more worried so that influenced his punishment alot. Furthermore Harry said that he was sore, no more no less. I would be annoyed if he would bounce back to his normal self after a spanking.
So, thank you for this chapter and please Don't get discouraged by those who think that Snape was to hard on Harry. You are the only One who knows how this story will progress and maybe we will meet a loving Snape later on?
He just has to learn how to be a good father and I believe that he will be one for Harrys sake.
Can't wait for more!
I'm just curious if you have children of your own? Typically parents don't give more than three or four spankings to their children at the most and in many places it's the law that you can't leave a red mark for more than 5 seconds on the child's backside or it's considered child abuse. That being said, I know Snape isn't a kind man and is probably not inclined to be a kind father in this particular story, but I think the spanking was unrealistic and overdone and that the point could have come across in less spankings.
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