A little short to tell, but I think more would be good.
Author's Response: I know it was short, I wanted to sorta lengthen it but I had to leave for holidays and my mother was frantic. I have posted my next chapter, its longer but not extremely lengthy, so I hope you enjoy it. Harry is in for a surprise.
What a fantastic premise for a story! I can't wait to see how Snape will play in this. How does Snape feel being that portrait in Harry's pocket, and having to interact with him. Please continue! I want to see where this goes!
Author's Response: I havent thought of Snapes POV yet, I am still building on his character. Thanks for the review, I am really looking forward to writing this... :D