Reviews For Another Life Lead
please keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Lol i liked that scene too. It was too much fun trying to write what I had pictured in my head! And thank you. I'm feeling lots better.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I figured it was about time for James to grow up a bit, seeing as he is a father now. He shoudl at least put some differences aside.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always thought Hufflepuff was just a little cozy Hobbit cabin, and when I took the Pottermore quiz and got sorted into Hufflepuff, the info banner sort of confirmed my idea. Hehe. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Now for story, I'm not getting why Lily is with James, since he has proven in this chapter how much he hasn't grown up (which is one of the things that made her notice him). Severus has shown his maturity, though his interaction with Lily is more than just sisterly affection. James won't let her have Sev as a friend, yet she lives with his best friend, regardless of the whole hiding deal. Not really sure if it's making much sense.
Thank you for pointing that out. I just went with a recipie that one of my friends made. Lily doesnt think she can cook all that well, so she doesnt make the sauce from scratch.
As for the James/Lily/Sev ordeal, that will be explained in later chapters, dont worry. But Sev and Lily are very close, so their interraction does seem a bit more than "sisterly affection", but just a bit of a spolier, it does not go any further than that.
Sirius is living with them because he wants to. He started off living with them in the beginning, and he will continue to live with them, no matter where they go. I imagine Sirius would rather llive in a cramped house than go back to his childhood home.
And I love the long chapters, even longer would be great !
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try and keep the characters Like James and Lily in character, or at least how I see how they would be if they had not died.
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