Reviews For Marge's Boyfriend
Really like this story, the more I read.
Author's Response: Isn't it creepy, how Snape can sneak around so well? I loved how they did the Astronomy Tower scene in the HBP film, where you hear everyone else coming up into the Tower, but Snape arrives silently, with just the tiniest creak of a floorboard to alert Harry. My hair stood up when the camera shifted to Snape, ooohhh, what a Moment!!! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Yes, I thought it would be a natural consequence of Harry's psychological and emotional state, rather than an abrupt failing of the wards. Because he really doesn't have anywhere else to go, the wards remain intact, but they're not all that strong. Thanks for reviewing! 😊
Another great chapter. Poor Harry. Kinda love that Ripper felt the need to pee on "Mr. Lawson" a second time. And the neighbors witnessing the chaos! Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just loved writing the Ripper scene! The Dursleys are always trying to show off to the neighbors, but not like that!!! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Hi, Dream! Yep-- Harry's in for an interesting interlude, to say the least!
Author's Response: Thanks, and glad you liked it! I had fun with this challenge, although the idea of Snape with Marge nearly made me sick up when I first read the posted challenge. Then I began to think, what if... And the story really took off! Many thanks for reading and reviewing. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so! I enjoyed writing it, and it really makes my day to hear your feedback! Especially since you were reading the story on a day that I spent at the dentist! Hee! I needed good news, so thanks for reading and reviewing! 😄
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story! 😊
Author's Response: After Marge grossly insulted Lily and assaulted her son, Snape felt perfectly entitled to get revenge on Lily's behalf. I had such fun writing the build-up to Marge opening the box! Only to have her hopes and dreams dashed. I strongly suspect that from now on, she will stick to her dogs and forget about men. 😃 Many thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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