Sounds like Harry turned out to be a werewolf after all. I liked Severus turning Dudley into a beach ball. After those comments from Dudley, I'm sure he enjoyed bouncing him around. If things are as bad in the cellar as I think, the Dursleys are in for major trouble.
Great start, can't wait for more!
Oh god.. Please write more!
| Title: Warning Bells
| 05 Jul 2015 2:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Por Merlín, que historia tan maravillosa, tu idea realmente tiene mérito.
Genial, espero que puedas actualizar pronto. Porque muero de ganas de seguir leyendo tu historia
| Title: Warning Bells
| 04 Jul 2015 10:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love beach ball Dudley wonderful image! Great cliffie but a dreadful start to the next chapter I think. Please update soon and rescue Harry!
| Title: Warning Bells
| 03 Jul 2015 12:00 am
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| Reviewer: Blackpanther (Anonymous)
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Great start! And quite a unique plot... I guess the voice begging Sev to help is Lily? Good that Harry has Sev, poor Harry, I'll bet the Dursleys have locked Harry in the cellar ever since his first transformation, maybe chained as well.... can't wait to see what happens, please update as soon as possible!
Wow, what acliff hanger! I loved the beach ball, Dudley probably liked being transformed and bounced, I would guess. Guess job with all the characterizations. I wonder what is in the cellar. Has Harry lived there all the time? Did he transform without the wolfsbane? And what's that voice in Snape's head? Great start! Thanks for sharing this story!
Good thing Mrs. Figg let them know what was going on at the Dursleys. I liked the idea of turning Dudley into a beach ball. Even as a toddler, he deserved it.
I hope Snape makes them pay.
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