| Title: Chapter 4
| 01 Sep 2015 6:51 pm
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Thank you you are handling the flashbacks really well
| Title: Chapter 3
| 01 Sep 2015 6:37 pm
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Thank you interesting chapter
| Title: Chapter 2
| 01 Sep 2015 6:25 pm
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 1
| 01 Sep 2015 1:16 pm
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Mmmm
Interesante pero se siente algo fuera el personaje de Dumbledore, en fin...
Damn, Dumbledore is a git! Go team snape!
Author's Response: I'm glad you approve of how Harry and Severus are reacting to this. Thanks for the review!
And the plot thickens! Great job!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) Working out how Dumbledore would have managed to steal a baby took a bit, in all honesty.
Muero de ganas por ver el enfrentamiento con Dumbledore,
Author's Response: Part of it will be happening in the next chapter :)
Good luck introducing that idea. I suspect Sirius would think pond scum was a good thing before acknowledging that Sev can be an okay person.
Author's Response: Sirius is definitely going to have a lot to say about Severus being Harry's father, so Harry's going to have his work cut out for him.
I liked how Snape has taken to being a parent and worrying over Harry. I also liked how you mentioned his appearance change, (I'm envisioning Snape with grey eyes).
Author's Response: That's pretty much how I picture Harry's appearance, although he has some Malfoy features beyond just his grey eyes. Glad you liked how this is going!
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