| Title: Chapter 8
| 25 Aug 2015 4:02 pm
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| Reviewer: savemyunicornclarence (Anonymous)
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This is so good! I love it. Snape's and Harry's pain and hope for the future and family gave me so many feels. Especially Snape's pain for he thought he lost his son for 16 years, but then regains his son only to have it be the one he tormented ... I cry for him. Glad you explained the whole Lucius/Severus/Narcissa thing going on and how they evolved into the cold, arrogant people in the future. Thank you! I am now going to read Sheankelor! It looks really good. Hope this continues or officially abandoned (search up name on AO3 ...) sadness if it is abandoned. It is a really good fic. Brilliantly written. Somber tone for a mature topic. I don't know. It gave me a haunted feeling when I read it. Hate Dumbledore in this fic. Greater Good can bite my arse. No one deserves the pain of losing their child. No one. I guess it brings up the argument of sacrificing the few for the many ... but that's another topic for another day. Brilliant job, Beargirl1393.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You won't regret reading Sheankelor, they're an awesome author and their stories are always interesting. Their stories are on FF.net and AO3 if you look them up. This story isn't abandoned, don't worry. I've just been really busy, I'm planning on continuing it very soon. I just need to get time to sit down and write, as well as figure out precisely where this is going. I have the main points plotted out, but connecting them is giving me a little trouble. Once I have the time, it'll work itself out. I'm also doing Hayffie week on another site, so I've been editing and posting my stories for that.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 11 Aug 2015 3:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Severus! Thank you for the story so far can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I just posted the new chapter not long ago, actually.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 11 Aug 2015 3:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good explanations thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
| Title: Chapter 6
| 11 Aug 2015 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Ah that answers my question thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 11 Aug 2015 3:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Probably too late but I vote for them to stay married I like just Severus and Harry!
Author's Response: It's not too late, but I'm planning for the Malfoys to stay together and Snape and Harry to do their thing.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 11 Aug 2015 3:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Is Harry going to born at the same time? If so Draco may not be in the same year as Harry! I love how this story is being told thank you
Author's Response: Draco's birthday is in June from what I've read, and Harry's is in July. I'm going to keep that, you'll see how it works.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 11 Aug 2015 3:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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OK a good explanation! But how has it come out now? I think I have as many questions as Harry!
Author's Response: There's going to be an explanation as to how it came out in the later chapters.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 11 Aug 2015 2:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Aug 2015 2:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I agree with Severus about Dumbledore! Thank you a good start
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
No había tenido tiempo de escribir un comentario por tus últimos capítulos, pero solo tengo una palabra para todos ellos, "MARAVILLOSOS"
Tienes una idea estupenda, y la has retratado de una manera hermosa,
me ha encantado
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story so far :) Thanks for the review!
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