If, and I mean if, you even THINK of killing Joseph, I am gonna torture you to oblivion.
Oh, no - Joseph! D: I hope everything will be all right! I like him. He's not allowed to die, okay? Okay.
Another good chapter - it's good to see that Severus is starting to get along with Harry, even if he's still not sure how he should conduct himself.
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| 11 Sep 2015 11:03 pm
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I hope gramps and Harry move in with Sev..!
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| 08 Sep 2015 2:29 am
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please.
do not kill the grandfather
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| 08 Sep 2015 2:28 am
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please.
do not kill the grandfather
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| 06 Sep 2015 9:44 pm
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Had Rowling explored Snape's character a bit more, this wouldn't have been a bit ooc for Snape. His memories were evident of that in the final book. Anyway, looking forward to more, though I'm sure I won't be the only one irritated if Joseph dies anytime soon. Keep up the good work!
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| 06 Sep 2015 8:29 pm
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Lovely thank you. I love the scene of Severus telling bedtime stories, so cute!
I think you did well with Severus. Gramps is just someone Severus's respects and has fond memories of. No way he can refuse him and his Green eyes :-)
I liked your Severus. He would probably be less snarky with Joseph Evans since he knew the man most of his life. The Evans sounded like they took on the roles of foster parents for Severus when he was young. Severus has gotten to know Harry more and sees him as more like Lily than James so he is going to be more patient. I hope Joseph is all right. He is a neat character.
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| 06 Sep 2015 3:22 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Love this story so far. Harry is adorable - so eager, energetic and happy, while Snape is believable too - finding it hard to deal with being wanted after years of being alone and closed off. Hope Joseph makes it though.
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