Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 23 Oct 2022 2:25 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great opening chapter! I love that Remus is there from the start.
Title: Chapter 1 27 Apr 2017 2:53 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    *Takes a break from not writing to go do some other form of procrastination, oh look, an angsty story! Squee!*

    I like that you are taking Harry's possible mental instability into question, compared to just healing his multiple injuries and assuring him that 'all will be okay.' I'm also loving that Remus was a part of this! I could see a co-parenting relationship there, if that's where you hope to take it! Thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response: Thank you! It was important to me that I not gloss over the emotional trauma Harry has also suffered, as it is something he will have to deal with, unfortunately. I'm also glad you like Remus' inclusion - I hadn't planned to use him, originally, but it had just seemed right, as I feel he would be especially adept at dealing with a frightened child. Harry's definitely going to need a lot of love and care, which he is going to receive. 
Title: Chapter 1 12 Oct 2015 8:44 pm
Reviewer: LOVE4SPOCK (Signed) [Report This]
    What happened to Dudley? Was he kidnapped? Were the murderers after Harry?

    Author's Response: All questions regarding the Dursleys and what happened that night should be answered in the next chapter, no worries! Thanks for reading.
Title: Chapter 1 11 Oct 2015 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great start to the story

    Author's Response: Glad you like it so far - thanks for the feedback!
Title: Chapter 1 11 Oct 2015 1:18 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! A new story!

    Author's Response: Indeed! ^^
Title: Chapter 1 28 Sep 2015 7:01 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    You have my interests peeked
    I want to know what happened to the Dursley's and where Dudley was at the time?
    I look forward to reading more :)

    Author's Response: That will be answered, although, I won't be spending much time on the Dursleys, really. Thanks for the R&R! I'm working on getting the next chapter finished and ready, hopefully soon.
Title: Chapter 1 21 Sep 2015 5:43 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Did I miss what happened to Dudley?

    Author's Response: Naught has been sad of Dudley's fate, just that he wasn't in the house. Don't worry, he's not been forgotten.
Title: Chapter 1 21 Sep 2015 1:14 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Off to a great start, Dream Painter! I can't wait to see Harry growing up at Hogwarts and interacting with the staff.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Kristeh! I have a bunch of ideas, so hopefully it will be a fun read along the way.
Title: Chapter 1 20 Sep 2015 11:29 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Good first chapter. It may be some time before young Harry trusts the adults considering the way he has been treated so far. I like that you added Remus to the fix. I could imagine him coaxing Harry out that way. It may be good that the Dursleys are dead since if they were still alive, one of the teachers would have wanted revenge.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I wasn't sure whether I would include Remus, at first, but it just felt right. He has a very gentle nature that I felt would work well with a distrustful, traumatized child. Thanks for the feedback! 

Title: Chapter 1 20 Sep 2015 10:06 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    excellent beginning

    Author's Response: Thank you.

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