This was just awesome! Great job! You capture the emotions perfectly. I look forward to another chapter or one shot.
| Title: To Speak
| 24 Apr 2017 8:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I can imagine it was hard to write but it is brilliant! I'm not sure if Voldermort is really gone and is this why Harry can't speak? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Heartbreaking and so well written. Harry is a much more damaged boy than he was at age 10 when he was found in the original story.
Really happy to see another update from you!
I like how the ideas from the previous "To Trust" are incorporated into this version with an older Harry, for example the deterioration of Harry's condition due to his magic compensating for his health, how different and yet how similar also an older and weaker Harry reacted to Snape's ministration.
Did Harry kill Voldemort then, when he blasted the bundle out of Wormtail's hands? And whose blue-grey eyes did Snape see? And is the tall thin figure at the scene with flickering streetlamps Dumbledore? So many questions? Do we get a continuation to this version? :)
I like both versions, by the way.
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