Minerva's reaction: "Hmm, wonder where he keeps his sleigh?"
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This is so sad!
Big angst here--you had me crying! Very well written. :) And I can believe that of Harry's friends. Though if the twins acted like that, they owe Harry 1,000 Galleons
I liked that Severus almost wasn't going to bring Harry to that room. And I liked that Harry and Draco weren't fighting for once :)
| Title: Christmas Day
| 19 Dec 2015 1:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this it was so sad but with a lovely ending, thank you so much and I'm looking forward to reading the next two parts!
I enjoyed this, and like how Draco and Harry got along for the holidays. Snape playing Santa worked well, and he wasn't out of character at it either. This was fun to read.
I like your Severus. He takes his duties as Head of House seriously. I also thought you did a good job with the speech patterns of Snape and Harry. Snape usually speaks so formally and a lot of writers don't think to follow that pattern. It was surprising to see Harry and Draco getting along so well but, after all, it is Christmas.
| Title: Christmas Day
| 18 Dec 2015 7:50 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great story! Looking forward to the rest.
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