Oh I love it. I love it so much. Oh my god what are words. It's so terribly heartbreaking but SO good. I love how James and Lily get so mad at him for dying and Snape is just ??????
“But sometimes, when I really want to see them, I try to make Uncle Vernon extra mad so he’ll send me to them again. Of course, if I don’t get him angry enough then it just hurts more; I hate it when that happens...”
That line gave me chills.
Poor Snape, to mention it. This poor guy can't catch a break.
Update soon, I hope! I'd LOVE to see where this goes.
Great start! What an interesting concept. Please continue.
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| 23 Feb 2016 7:07 am
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| Reviewer: alexander (Anonymous)
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Very promising!!!!!!! I love this chapter!
This a novel approach. It must have been disconcerting for Snape to have Harry chatting away about visiting his dead parents regularly. At least Severus knows that Lily forgives him and James is sorry for the bullying. I kind of wonder what the Dursleys think of him sort of popping back and forth between being dead and then alive again.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't think the Dursleys really noticed. I imagine it went something along the lines of Harry falls 'unconscious', gets shoved in his cupboard/room, comes out some time later healed of his major wounds; so only minor freakishness.
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