Good story, I am enjoying it so far.
BAMF Snape ! Great chapter, I suspect the Malfoys will soon get a change of heart}
Author's Response: I had to look up what 'BAMF' meant, and I had to admit, I laughed. You nailed it - Snape is totally a BAMF!! And yes, I have a feeling you may be right about the Malfoys... ;) Thank you for the review!
Title: Prologue
| 16 Mar 2016 1:48 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Much improved scene in the office thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I hope you enjoy the rest, as well.
It sounds like Harry needs to work through this loss. Hitting Snape and destroying Dumbledore's office may have briefly felt good but he needs to talk to someone about it. Definitely not Snape though.
Author's Response: I know, poor Harry... Thank you for the review!
Thanks so much for sharing with us! I'm really enjoying the set up of this story, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I can't wait to share more. :)
Nice pace!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Wow!! Powerful! I am sucked into the story already! Great job. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I can't wait to show you my troubled version of the characters. :}
Uh, WHOA, that was kind of amazing. It was so beautifully realistic and intense and angsty and in character! I've always wondered what the scenario would have been like if Snape had been there. It was seriously so great-- especially when Harry threw that punch. You can't blame him-- this moment in the books was seriously heartbreaking, and having Snape here makes it all the more intense. Bravo!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO much!! I'm SO glad you liked it!! :)
Title: Prologue
| 13 Mar 2016 12:37 pm
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Reviewer: Lyza (Anonymous)
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I am very excited To read more of this fic!
Author's Response: I'm excited to share more with you!! Thank you for the review!
Great drama! Way to get the depth of Harry's emotions and feelings. I didn't feel like the books had done it justice, but you did. :) Snape being there added so much more drama, it was almost painful to watch Harry go through it. it was good to hear all of what Snape did, things that were not really said outright in the books. I do love how much influence and power Dumbledore has over Snape though, you can tell that Snape respects and listens to him. I loved all the explanations; if only Harry had known before hand, the mess would of been avoided! So who else is Kreacher serving? Bellatrix? Narcissa and Lucius?
Author's Response: Muhahaha, wait and see my friend... *Rubs hands together evilly* lol, Thank you for the review!
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