Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 16 Mar 2016 1:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good descriptive writing thank you

    Author's Response: Gaw, thanks. :)
Title: Chapter 1 15 Mar 2016 2:30 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it doesn't seem like anyone tried to help Harry recover from the loss of Sirius since Dumbledore. The Dursleys don't care. Though I wonder if Minerva saw them abusing Harry. I'm not sure she would have managed to keep from hexing them if she had.

    Author's Response: In my way of thinking, Minerva didn't see Harry at all that morning because he was probably too busy doing slave work - sorry, CHORES - inside the house. I'm sure after the Dursley's had him cook their breakfast, he was probably tasked with doing the dishes, cleaning the kitchen, mopping the floor, buffing the stainless steel appliances, vacuuming the living room, scrubbing the toilets, pruning the rose bushes in the back garden... You get the idea. :} Poor Harry - he's the definition of "cheap child labor". Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Mar 2016 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!
    That bitch
    Hope that horse-faced witch gets what she deserves. Hope they both do.

    Go Snape!!
    Love this story!

    Author's Response: Oooo just you wait, my friend. I have very large plans for the Dursley horror show!! Just you wait... Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Mar 2016 4:47 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. Oh, those Dursleys had better duck and cover.

    Author's Response: You have no idea, MUHAHAHA! ;) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Mar 2016 12:44 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so tense and angsty, I can't wait to see how you spun it into a severitus!

    Author's Response: Oooo, tense and angsty - my favorite!! (I'm a sick, twisted loon, lol.) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Mar 2016 12:33 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh, poor Harry. I wonder if it was Snape who made the hose water turn on and wet Harry, prompting him to drink. What an awful time he is having at the Dursley's! What jerks they are being to him! I am so glad that Snape is getting a good, real look at what Harry's home life is like though. Harry is such a hard worker! And it is amazing that he can keep his cool, but I expect that physical punishments for acting out or talking back has trained him not too. I bet that is why Harry feels so free to talk back and act out at school, because the consequences aren't as bad.

    I loved that Minerva was watching Harry first. I wonder what she noticed, if anything. I suppose maybe she didn't notice much since she had the early morning watch. Great start to the story! I looks very promising! The chapter was short, but had a great pace setting things up and introducing us to the theme of the story. I couldn't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: It was Snape!! :) I wanted it to be kind of ambiguous though, so I'm glad you weren't sure. I mean, Heaven forbid that he show that he might actually CARE. ;) Thank you for the review, my friend!! I wouldn't be here on this amazing website if it wasn't for you!

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