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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
Author's Response: Gaw, thanks. :)
Author's Response: In my way of thinking, Minerva didn't see Harry at all that morning because he was probably too busy doing slave work - sorry, CHORES - inside the house. I'm sure after the Dursley's had him cook their breakfast, he was probably tasked with doing the dishes, cleaning the kitchen, mopping the floor, buffing the stainless steel appliances, vacuuming the living room, scrubbing the toilets, pruning the rose bushes in the back garden... You get the idea. :} Poor Harry - he's the definition of "cheap child labor". Thank you for the review!
That bitch Hope that horse-faced witch gets what she deserves. Hope they both do. Go Snape!! Love this story! Author's Response: Oooo just you wait, my friend. I have very large plans for the Dursley horror show!! Just you wait... Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: You have no idea, MUHAHAHA! ;) Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Oooo, tense and angsty - my favorite!! (I'm a sick, twisted loon, lol.) Thank you for the review!
I loved that Minerva was watching Harry first. I wonder what she noticed, if anything. I suppose maybe she didn't notice much since she had the early morning watch. Great start to the story! I looks very promising! The chapter was short, but had a great pace setting things up and introducing us to the theme of the story. I couldn't wait to read more! Author's Response: It was Snape!! :) I wanted it to be kind of ambiguous though, so I'm glad you weren't sure. I mean, Heaven forbid that he show that he might actually CARE. ;) Thank you for the review, my friend!! I wouldn't be here on this amazing website if it wasn't for you! |
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