Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 4 16 Mar 2016 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you hint at problems and horrors it keeps a sense of suspense to the story

    Author's Response: I'm trying!! Thanks.
Title: Chapter 4 15 Mar 2016 3:24 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He has had a rotten day and now Snape is grilling him. Though it sounds like Severus is reeling himself after having all his beliefs about Harry shattered. That won't be easy for him to accept.

    Author's Response: Snape was definitely NOT expecting what happened. I think it's knocked him off balance, to say the least. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 4 13 Mar 2016 1:09 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Love, love, love! This was fantastic! What drama, what angst! It's official, I love this story.

    Great job with Severus and humanizing him, all the thoughts and motives are simply fantastic - very in character and with more depth than we get to see in the books.

    It sounds like Harry has had a rough time of it, and has let on more than he means to about what happened - but it's good, he needs to. Maybe with vulnerability will helps him be better understood, and also open up more to Snape.

    It's great to see and hear Snape's thoughts and his almost constant thoughts and obsession with Lily, Harry's mother. Very much in character. And tricking Harry and then Legilimencing him - wow. Yup, very much in character.

    I am loving this story. Great pace, great development!

    Author's Response: Thank you again, my friend. I know that my versions of Snape and Harry are a TAD out of canon, but I'm trying hard to stick to the core of how I feel they came off in the books. I'm SO SO glad that you're enjoying it!! :)

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