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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
*snickers* Author's Response: I can totally imagine him saying something like that, can't you? Lol. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! Without saying too much, his way of hiding it is important and comes back later in the story... Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much!! :)
Author's Response: Lol, I definitely plan on it. :) Thank you so much for reading!!
This is seriously amazingly, brilliantly written. Everyone is so WONDERFULLY in character. Severus' bewilderment at the situation is just great, and the concern over the boy he hates so much. And, of, course, any mentioned of that unrequited Lily love is just great. You really capture Harry well after Sirius' death. His actions and confusions are spot on. I particularly like how when Snape first brought him to his home, he started the hyperventilate, just because so much had happened that he hadn't been expecting and was SO outside the norm. I would have left reviews on other chapters, but they were rather on the shorter side and I didn't want to stop reading :P I hope to see an update soon! Author's Response: Ok, I just "Squuee"d so loud that my husband legitimately came around the corner like, "What?" lol. :) You made my day!! I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story!! And you're totally right, btw. My chapters are a bit short - but it's only because I'm a Work From Home mama with a hubby and two kids, lol. I'm lucky if I can sit for a solid 10 minutes of writing before having to jump up and feed someone, clean something, fix something, prevent someone from dying (my one-year-old is in a climbing stage)... UGH. So thank you for your patience with me. I try to give a lot of "bang for your buck", so-to-speak. I can't wait to share more with you!! :)
Author's Response: Don;t worry, I absolutely plan on writing more!! :) Thank you for the review!
Poor, poor Harry. Of course he would have a bad reaction to the Dreamless Sleep! Poor kid can't catch a break. crazy that he accidently broke his Potions Professor's rib! Woah! Way to add to the drama and angst, and hurt comfort. I'm LOVING it. It definitely adds something new and unexpected, and creates more of a struggle in the story, a way to get Snape to rely on Harry for a bit. Fantastic chapter and developments! Poor Harry is so desperate to please. Even if Snape hadn't shown him any kindness, Harry is desperate to please. And now feeling guilty, wow, he is going out of his way to help and take care of the professor. Clever to add the homework for Harry, having Snape try to teach him strategy and thinking in war. Nice addition! I love seeing Snape and Harry taking care of each other like they do in this chapter. The ending was a fantastic way to end this chapter, having the Headmaster drop by. I am loving all of your characterizations. Such an entertaining story! Author's Response: Gaw, stop... You're makin' me blush. :) Seriously though, I'm THRILLED that you like it. I can't wait to keep going. :) Thank you for the review! |
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