Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 7 30 Jan 2018 9:17 am
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story, but I was wondering why Severus didn't heal his ribs with magic?
Title: Chapter 7 16 Mar 2016 7:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you back to angst!

    Author's Response: Let the angst begin! :)
Title: Chapter 7 15 Mar 2016 3:51 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an accident waiting to happen. Harry is still on edge after being assaulted. He isn't sure what is going on with Snape. Meanwhile Severus is trying to change his viewpoint of Harry while he is in pain from his broken rib. Too bad Harry took off though.

    Author's Response: Poor Harry isn't sure how to deal with his emotions. He's never exactly had a healthy adult to emulate (with the exception of Dumbledore, who's end goal has always been "The Greater Good" and not Harry himself, so in my opinion that doesn't count.) Thank you for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 7 15 Mar 2016 1:40 am
Reviewer: Hilary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm loving this story so far! You've done a good job keeping everyone in character, and the plot is compelling. I can't wait to find out where Harry went. I hope Snape finds him before anyone bad does!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 7:19 pm
Reviewer: victoria (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is so good please update again soon i really want to find out what happens next.

    Author's Response: You got it, my friend!! :) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape may feel like he wants Harry "back where he belongs", but Snape sure doesn't know how to treat him.

    He tells Harry that he was "weeping pathetically", he disciplines Harry because Harry was in a hurry to help Snape, he tells Harry that the Order "doesn't know what to do with Harry", then he tells Harry that what happened with Dudley was basically his fault.

    Way to make the abused child feel welcome, Snape.

    Author's Response: I know, he can be quite the bastard ('scuse my French). But although Snape may think he's got it all under control, he's very close to losing it (as we shall soon see...) Poor Snape. He's just as messed up as Harry, maybe even more so...
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 2:22 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    OH that last line killed me. The feels! You write such a cold Snape, and I love it.

    Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much!! I'm really enjoying exploring this version of Snape. I'm glad you like it!!
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 1:54 pm
Reviewer: Abie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really riveting, well written story. Everyone is so perfectly in character. I eagerly await an update.

    Author's Response: Gaw, thanks so much!! :)
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 7:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Fantastic chapter! I love how panicked Snape was when Harry left. Snape was really being such a jerk to him. :( So sad that Snape has to revert like that, I'm not surprised that Harry left.

    Having Snape be injured adds a level and measure of drama and worry. Harry really is vulnerable without his wand, and Snape knows exactly what could happen to him if the Death Eaters catch him. So scary!

    I loved Snape's worry and panic here.

    It was really cool to see the flurry of magic in the kitchen in the beginning of this chapter. Very imaginative.

    I loved reading the conversation between Dumbledore and Snape. Interesting that Snape would keep Harry's secret shame from Dumbledore; I wonder at his reasons. it seems like there are hints that perhaps Snape had experienced it himself.

    Great chapter. I really enjoyed Harry's characterization, being a troubled teenager, but still a good kid.

    Snape is such a troubled and complex character as well. You handled him very well in this chapter. I am really loving the story!

    Author's Response: I think that in that moment right before Harry disappeared out the door, Snape realized what a prat he was being to the poor kid. Snape's viciousness is his go-to self-defense when he feels that someone is getting too close. Unfortunately Harry has a way of worming into people's hearts, which Snape was definitely not ready for. The parallels he draws from Harry's home life make it even worse for him. He's definitely (unintentionally) started the domino effect, which he wouldn't be able to stop even if he wanted to. Thank you so much for the review! :)

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