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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
I knew as soon as I saw the strangled gasp bit behind Harry, oh god THE FACT THAT SHES CALLED LILY ASWELL IS JUST I’s aight is cool AND HER DAUGHTER IS CALLED JILLY!!!!! DUUUUUUUUUUDE
Author's Response: I can't wait to see how she responds to... well, everything. She's been an interesting character to write. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! There's definitely a lot of emotion that the poor guy has to sort out. I'm looking forward to writing it. Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Lol, I'm SO sorry, but I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story! I posted a bunch of chapters all at once today. I hope that makes up for it!
Author's Response: "Ack Sacrablur"... OMG that made me laugh!!! I'm sorry to do that to you. I will be updating momentarily with lots more chapters. I hope that makes up for it!! :)
Muah ha ha, I loved the moment when Snape appeared. Harry's heart must of dropped. I LOVED your descriptions and characterizations. Poor Snape being so injured though! He's going through a lot to try to get to Harry! So much pain shows even more dedication. So shocking to meet Lilith for Harry AND Snape. I love her though, she is exactly what needs to enter Snape's life, I think. Harry's too. Great chapter! Author's Response: I almost didn't go with Lily, to be honest. I know people out there really despise OCs. But I just couldn't get her out of my head... She's a charmer, that Lily. And she's definitely not afraid to put Snape in his place. :} I'm glad you like her as much as I do!!
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