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Title: Chapter 8 22 Jun 2020 9:47 pm
Reviewer: PhoenixFeathers (Signed) [Report This]
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    I knew as soon as I saw the strangled gasp bit behind Harry, oh god
    THE FACT
    THAT SHES CALLED LILY ASWELL
    IS JUST
    I’s aight is cool
    AND HER DAUGHTER IS CALLED JILLY!!!!! DUUUUUUUUUUDE
Title: Chapter 8 17 Mar 2016 3:31 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Lily and her child were a surprise to both Harry and Snape. Especially since she was in the park that Snape and Harry's mother used to frequent. Looking forward to finding out more.

    Author's Response: I can't wait to see how she responds to... well, everything. She's been an interesting character to write. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 8 16 Mar 2016 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very dramatic ending! Loved Jilly and Lilly thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far! I'm really enjoying it. I like how Snape isn't friendly and nice overnight. I like the slow progression of their relationship and I look forwarding to reading more on what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you so very much! There's definitely a lot of emotion that the poor guy has to sort out. I'm looking forward to writing it. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 3:09 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    What is happening oh my god I need an update

    Author's Response: Lol, I'm SO sorry, but I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story! I posted a bunch of chapters all at once today. I hope that makes up for it!
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 10:58 am
Reviewer: victoria (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ack sacrablur thats not fair this is amazing you cant just leave it like that i demand an update only if its ok with you mind its just really good.

    Author's Response: "Ack Sacrablur"... OMG that made me laugh!!! I'm sorry to do that to you. I will be updating momentarily with lots more chapters. I hope that makes up for it!! :)
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 8:29 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    The use of accidental magic was awesome. It is so much like Harry to risk his life and safety to save a little girl. I hate to think about what would have happened to Harry if his magic didn't kick in and apparate him and the little girl to safety.

    Muah ha ha, I loved the moment when Snape appeared. Harry's heart must of dropped. I LOVED your descriptions and characterizations.

    Poor Snape being so injured though! He's going through a lot to try to get to Harry! So much pain shows even more dedication.

    So shocking to meet Lilith for Harry AND Snape. I love her though, she is exactly what needs to enter Snape's life, I think. Harry's too. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: I almost didn't go with Lily, to be honest. I know people out there really despise OCs. But I just couldn't get her out of my head... She's a charmer, that Lily. And she's definitely not afraid to put Snape in his place. :} I'm glad you like her as much as I do!!
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 7:22 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!! :)

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