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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
BTW do you know that the link to your polaroid of Sev and Lily is broken? I just tried to google it, in 2019, nada, zip,rien du tout. Is the photo gone because of the horrible lightning? I hope your life is much better now, and all are feeling well. Happy writing.
*sniffles loudly* Author's Response: Awww... Mission accomplished!! Lol, jk of course. I don't want to make you cry!! But I'm glad that I'm doing a good job in opening up the characters enough to make them seem real. You've made me so happy!! Thank you!!
Author's Response: Believe it or not, Severus had always been so wrapped up in his own grief that he'd never really given baby Harry much thought. But now that he's starting to know (and care for) Harry, he's starting to realize that he's not the only one who is in pain over the death of Lily. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Great that Harry finally figured out how to do Occlumency!!! Dangerous that Snape was willing to throw Lily's box into the fire, though! What if Harry couldn't save it? I bet Lily's box was warded against flames. :) Harry is so sweet, caring about Professor Snape's health, getting him his potions without being asked and offering to cook. After years of potions lessons it is amazing that Snape trusts him enough to cook in his house though! Good that Snape cares about Harry enough to get Lupin to take him clothes shopping while Snape goes to retrieve Harry's stuff. That's good of him, especially after how much he hates Lupin. Or does he? Beautiful, beautiful chapter. Just precious. Thank you for writing and sharing it! Author's Response: Harry is still in the beginning stages of healing, but I'm sure as he deals with his grief and trauma, happier memories about his parents will start to come through. I think Snape is finally starting to realize that he may have underestimated Harry, his skills, and most importantly who he is as a person. And as for Lupin... Snape needed someone that he trusted to distract Harry, so that he was far away and safe from the Dursleys. And he knew that Harry and Lupin would actually have fun together (as opposed to say, shopping with McGonagall.) And although he doesn't necessarily like Lupin, "the wolf" is one of the only people within the order that he trusts with Harry's safety whom he can actually stomach having to interact with. :) Thank you for the review!
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