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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
Parvati... I seem to hate Tom more and more with every fic I read.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Thank YOU for reading! :)
Author's Response: Awww, thanks for reaching out. I'm SO happy that you're liking the story!! :)
Author's Response: I know, right? Don't you just want to reach out and hug him, even if he'd hex you for doing it? lol :}
Author's Response: Only time will tell. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Also, I don't know how to feel about this new Lily yet, but I'm getting used to the idea the more and more you write her. Your story is simply marvelous-- I can't even find the right words. There's something about it that tugs away and makes it feel very natural. Author's Response: Awww, well thank you! My husband saw a bit of what I was writing about Voldemort and was like, "Damn babe, and people say that you're one of the nicest people they've ever met. If they only knew..." I had to laugh at that. It was pretty twisted. And although I hate thinking about such dark, demented things, I think you're absolutely right that we never get to see enough of it firsthand. And it's totally ok if you're unsure about Lily. Hopefully I can do a good enough job of writing her to win you over. ;) Lol. Thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: Gawww... Thanks. The scenes between the two of them are definitely some of my favorites. I'm glad you liked it!!
Author's Response: Poor Harry... he's had a lot happen to him in his young life. Thank goodness he has someone that recognizes the warning signs and seems to care enough about him to actually do something. We'll see what happens!
Author's Response: OMGoodness, I'm sorry! I've been in that same position many, many times. Even more so now that I'm penning my first story. Ideas continually jump into my skull after the kids are down and it's time for me to go to sleep - I'll think of an interaction between characters and BAM! 3 hours later it's 2am and I'm still at my computer like a woman possessed. Lol. I'm SO glad that you like it so far! Thank you for the review!
And Lucious being cut like that - I really hope that it can be fixed... otherwise he will be half blind for the rest of his life and lose all depth perception. He won't be any use in a fight from now on because of that. What a mess Voldemort is making of his followers. I really hope that Draco sees this, and that the whole Malfoy family can somehow get out. I wonder if Harry is watching this. His Occlumency was greatly strengthened, but if he is watching then maybe they can save Parvarti. I'm sure the Cruciatus curse is NOT helping Severus' rib! He is going to return home in a sorry state. But will Harry be there when he returns? Or will he go to 12 Grimmauld place? What a mess. It was good to see what a terrible villain Voldemort is though. It was great to see Snape's thoughts and the difficulty he has bearing this dichotomy. Can Severus ever expect pure, loving people in his life after having to face such monstrosity over and over again? I'm sure he doesn't think so. But he should and I hope that Harry and Lily prove it to him. Fantastic story. Thank you for the update. I can understand the difficulty in writing it. Thanks for pushing through. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was always so dreadfully curious what a Death Eaters meeting with the Dark Lord was truly like, especially when things didn't go Voldemort's way. I hope I did a decent job of showing just how insanely cruel he could be. And yes, Severus is definitely not in his right mind when he leaves the manor. Although, he's pushing everything so down deep that I doubt he even feels any pain at this point... We'll have to wait and see. ;) Thank you for the review! |
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