Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 17 02 Apr 2016 9:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah!! I did not see that coming. Oh boy. What a fantastic story! Just fantastic.

    I loved Severus frantic pacing and arguing with Dumbledore. I wonder if Dumbledore knows Harry is a horcrux, if he would allow Harry to die.

    I love how Severus thinks of himself as a father to Harry, even if he doesn't want to admit it. He's in a bad way, doesn't he know that drinking is not going to enable him to protect and help Harry, as far away as Harry is?

    Can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! Poor Sev, his go-to for dealing with his issues has always been his Occlumency shields. But when those start to crumble, he's got nothing, and turned to the only thing that could give him any semblance of peace without actually dealing with anything: drinking. Hopefully both he and Harry can work their issues out together, but I guess only time will tell. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 17 01 Apr 2016 9:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very powerful chapter thank you

    Author's Response: I'm extremely happy that you liked it. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 17 01 Apr 2016 3:04 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't see Harry staying with the Weasleys too long. He is going to want to help Snape. As for Albus, I am surprised that he didn't head to the Weasley home immediately to work on warding.

    Author's Response: I didn't do a very good writing it - in fact I don't even think I mentioned it (shame on me - but Dumbledore did in fact strengthen the wards the day that Harry arrived. And I have a feeling you may be right about Harry staying with the Weasleys...
Title: Chapter 17 31 Mar 2016 11:59 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW. What a transformation in Severus' behavior towards Harry since the first chapter. While I think Dumbledore is a bit justified in his anger about Severus handling Harry that one time, I think that leaving things to chance is just as irresponsible.

    OH that last line-- Oooooh.

    Author's Response: I agree about Dumbledore. He's a meddling old fool who is doing his best to save the world from certain destruction. Poor guy, lol. And yeah, Severus is going through a MAJOR transformation, and with his traumatic background and all the issues he's never addressed, it's definitely a difficult scenario. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 17 31 Mar 2016 11:55 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Pretty intense!

    Author's Response: For sure!! Thank you for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 17 31 Mar 2016 3:03 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    First off, I hope you're okay and wish your family well. Second, I love the surprise ending at the end as well as the extremely manipulative and hypocritical Dumbledore, who gets mad at Snape for rough handling Harry but think of him as a pawn. Can't wait till next time

    Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words about my husband and family. It's definitely been a trying time. But it could have been SO much worse, so I'm thankful for every crazy moment. :) I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story! I completely agree about Dumbledore - totally manipulative and hypocritical. Thank you for the review! :)

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