Oh my god dudleys an actual prick 😨
omg! dudley started trouble for harry!! hope their pain in dudley's future! glad that tonk check on harry....
| Title: Chapter 30
| 29 May 2016 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you very well written if very sad, poor Harry please get him out of there soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm hoping as much as you are that Harry gets out of there... I guess we'll both have to wait and see. Thank you for the review!!
Holy angst, I don't know who's more on the verge of an emotional breakdown after this chapter-- me, or these characters.
Author's Response: OMGawd I am RIGHT. THERE. with you!! I have a love/hate relationship with these dark chapters. I love the growth that happens within the characters, but I hate having to dig into such horrible emotions. Thank you so much for the sweet review!!
After his and Harry's reception, I would have thought Dumbledore would have been keeping a closer eye on Harry while he was at the Dursleys. Will Dumbledore come in time to see what Harry is going through? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Dumbledore... Oh, Dumbledore. The man is very powerful, and his heart is definitely in the right place. But he places too much stock in his belief that people are ultimately good. It's a mistake he's made repeatedly throughout his life. In this case, he trusted the Dursleys to do the right thing, but yet again he was proven so very, very wrong. Let's hope he comes in time!! Thank you for the review! :)
Woah was incredible! The descriptions of Snape's pain was exquisite, and his anxiety for his family was palatable. Fantastic descriptions. I myself found myself worried about all of them. I loved how Lily and Harry worked on Snape's hands; as a Potions Master his hands are probably the most important thing for him. It was interesting that he didn't care for his hands as much as he cared about his family. I loved that, it was a great example of how much he loved them. And then to find out that Harry was sent back to his relatives! I can't imagine the panic and terror Snape might have over that!
I was so worried about everyone ending up in the hospital hurt. I am so relieved that Snape seemed to be the only one severely damaged. I'd imagine Snape feels the same way too. Thank goodness Jillian is okay! I was most worried about her; I half expected and hoped that someone used accidental magic to put up a shield charm to protect the family. There certainly were enough accidental magic users in that group!
But Harry! Oh no. What a terrible situation he found himself in! Just awful! If Dudley gets a chance to dish out Harry's punishment, he may actually find himself raped. What a terrible, terrible thing Dumbledore did by putting him back there! I really hope that someone rescues Harry in time. Snape will be mad as it is by putting Harry in danger, and then Harry got beat up - Snape will be furious with Dumbledore and the Dursleys. Let's just hope that Dumbledore is aware of the violence on Harry's person and is storming to the rescue! Or one of the order members noticed something wrong. The black paint on Harry's window is cruel. Maybe Harry can break the window and yell or somehow signal for help.
Oh, I really, really hope that someone comes to Hary's rescue! If not Dumbledore, Snape, or an order member, than Lily! She begged Dumbledore to not send Harry there. Maybe she can come up with a plan! Like Muggle adoption papers. What a mess.
Fantastic story, I loved the update, all the tension and drama. Just fantastic, despite the scary content. I was so, so happy to see an update! Thank you so much for continuing the story and sharing it with us! I know you are under a lot of stress and worry with your own family. Thank you again. Your updates are a brightening and treasure of my week. I am always so excited to see a new chapter posted. Thank you again.
| Title: Chapter 30
| 28 May 2016 4:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Luna (Anonymous)
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Please update again ASAP! This is making me crazy!
Poignant and angsty.... With some hope now that Snape is awake.... I love how they only worry for each other as bad of a situation they're in themselves
| Title: Chapter 30
| 28 May 2016 1:21 pm
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| Reviewer: lyzasnape (Anonymous)
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