That was a sad chapter. You did a nice job capturing Albus' despair. Having a horcrux on him every day would have been enough to drive even Dumbledore round the bend with out the added misery of Harry and Severus' situation.
Will you be updating soon? I know you were out of town, but I'm still
So very interested with what is going to happen.
| Title: Chapter 33
| 04 Aug 2016 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a cliffie! Thank you an amazing chapter very intense and dramatic. You almost made me pity Dumbledore and I can't stand him!
wondering if the ring is feeling into his emotion.. love the emotional that was flying off of severus..
Ahhhh!!!! No! Well I guess better Dumbledore have a withered hand than commit suicide. :/ If the ring is still cursed, I mean. The shock of the curse might shock him and he still might plummet to his death. I bet the ring is causing a lot of Dumbledore's despair, just like the locket did with Harry in the seventh book. I think if Dumbledore had committed suicide that Snape would of felt guilty. I wonder if Dumbledore was the anonymous source to the Muggle newspaper. Fantastic chapter, I was so happy to see another update so soon! Thank you for it!
Author's Response: You nailed it!! ;) I was hoping that this chapter wasn't too ambiguous. But yes, Dumbledore already felt guilty after seeing Sev and Harry so beaten and bloodied. And yes, the ring was indeed causing his level of despair to reach suicidal heights. I was never satisfied with the simple explanation that he, "Lost his head." He is such a great wizard that I was determined to flesh out the story a bit. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! :) Thank you for the review.
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