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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
Author's Response: I can't tell you how long I've wanted to write this chapter. Poor Sev has had such a hard life... And as for Harry, well... That poor kid has had a rough go of things, too. He has issues to work out, just like Snape. I guess we'll see what happens.
What an abrupt turn! Wow. Just wow. And how is Harry doing after all these days? Fantastic story, thanks so much for the updates! Author's Response: I'm really hoping and praying that Sev has found someone that can be the light in all the darkness that has surrounded him his whole life. I feel like if anyone can do it, Lily can. And as for Harry, I promise we're getting there. The poor kid has been through the ringer, and definitely has some stuff he has to work out. All I can say is that he is none too happy being at the Weasley's, as much as he loves them. We'll soon see!! Thank you so much for the review! :)
I loved Severus frantic pacing and arguing with Dumbledore. I wonder if Dumbledore knows Harry is a horcrux, if he would allow Harry to die. I love how Severus thinks of himself as a father to Harry, even if he doesn't want to admit it. He's in a bad way, doesn't he know that drinking is not going to enable him to protect and help Harry, as far away as Harry is? Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks!! Poor Sev, his go-to for dealing with his issues has always been his Occlumency shields. But when those start to crumble, he's got nothing, and turned to the only thing that could give him any semblance of peace without actually dealing with anything: drinking. Hopefully both he and Harry can work their issues out together, but I guess only time will tell. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Fantastic chapter. I would LOVE to see Parvati kick butt. Author's Response: It literally hurt to write this chapter. Poor Sev... Poor Harry... It's all crumbling before their eyes. The Parvati one-shot it coming, promise! :) I may have to write it before the end of this story, as the story is dying to be told. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Author's Response: Gawww... Thanks. Honestly, although it's been harder for me to sit for any length of time and write (thanks to the hubby's injury), I honestly feel like these characters write themselves. But thank you so much!! I promise the next chapter will be up soon!
Author's Response: I'm extremely happy that you liked it. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! Yes, I just stumbled on that beautiful song recently - right before I started writing this story, in fact. Now it is forever etched in my mind as "Snape and Lily's song". :} Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO much! I can't tell you how thrilled I am that you like it! I've been dying to write that scene for a very long time, and was worried that I wouldn't do the characters justice. So thank you for making me feel like maybe I actually did. :)
Author's Response: I didn't do a very good writing it - in fact I don't even think I mentioned it (shame on me - but Dumbledore did in fact strengthen the wards the day that Harry arrived. And I have a feeling you may be right about Harry staying with the Weasleys...
OH that last line-- Oooooh. Author's Response: I agree about Dumbledore. He's a meddling old fool who is doing his best to save the world from certain destruction. Poor guy, lol. And yeah, Severus is going through a MAJOR transformation, and with his traumatic background and all the issues he's never addressed, it's definitely a difficult scenario. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you so much for the review! :) |
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