Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 16 24 Mar 2016 3:36 am
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    I wouldn't mind a one-shot outtake!

    It's going to be more difficult for Snape and Harry to reconcile/grow together now. I think it's interesting, how you're having Harry have protective feelings of Severus, and not just the other way around.

    Author's Response: Yeah... poor guys. They both have some issues that they need to work out before they can grow together as a family. Hopefully all will go well, but I guess we'll see... ;) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 16 24 Mar 2016 3:19 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Noooooooo! Don't leave Snape all alone, come on Harry someone needs to be in his corner! I love this story, and I'm pretty sure a one shot spin off would be fantastic coming from you

    Author's Response: Gawww, thanks. I know, poor Snape... He just can't catch a break. But stick with me, I promise it will be worth it!! Thank you for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 16 24 Mar 2016 2:59 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus really doesn't seem to have any sense of self-worth. He is even worse than Harry. Harry had enough of a look at Severus' past that I don't think he will let it drop though. The one-shot about Parvati sounds interesting. I would enjoy reading it. I was very glad to hear that your husband is OK. That must have been terrifying for you.

    Author's Response: Yes, terrifying is an understatement. I practically tore the hospital apart to get to him. But thank the good Lord, all is well and he's on the mend now. And you're completely right about Sev... His sense of self-worth is unhealthy at best, completely non-existent at worst. The poor guy has been through a lot in his life... Thank goodness he's got people with his best interest now in his corner!! We'll see what happens. Thank you for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 14 21 Mar 2016 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Umm...wow! That ws quite the cliffhanger. Thanks for such a great story.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Thank YOU for reading! :)
Title: Chapter 15 21 Mar 2016 8:04 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Holy cow. Wow.

    First, I am so glad that Severus is back, and mostly physically okay. But so tormented. You did a fantastic job conveying that. Wow.

    And now Harry knows, knows the secret Snape probably keeps about self harming himself. oh geee, I am so worried about what will happen next. What a mess. But it is the worse messes that bring people together the strongest. Severus really, really needs help. I wish Harry had been able to call for Madame Pomfrey.

    I also still hope that they can save Parvarti. Poor girl. I really hope that Remus will be able to help lead a rescue mission. She desperately needs to be saved. How is Lucius Malfoy's eye? Is he really blinded in that eye now? Perhaps he will get a magical replacement like Mad-eye Moody. He;s got to be in his own private hell now.

    Fantastic chapter, I love this story. Thank you so much for finding time to write between your busy life and the sudden events that rocked your world. Take your time; we'll be grateful for whatever and whenever you are able to write and update.

    Author's Response: Yeah... Both of our boys just don't seem to realize how much they need each other, do they? But as you so eloquently said, it is the worst messes that truly bring people together. And sadly, yes, Lucious is blinded in that eye for good. As Dumbledore (and Snape, for that matter) have shown - dark magic leaves traces. I hadn't considered the magical eye replacement, but hmmmm... That's an interesting tidbit. Perhaps I'll have to see if I can fit that in. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 15 21 Mar 2016 6:09 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Majorly intense chapter!

    Author's Response: Gah!! Right?! It was both exhilarating and difficult to write, but I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 15 21 Mar 2016 12:53 am
Reviewer: nnicolexxx (Signed) [Report This]
    I realized I haven't left a comment on this story yet, and I figured it was about time to write one. I've been enjoying this story so much! You had me hooked from the first day it was posted; it's so well written, and the characters are so well portrayed. I've always loved fanfics where Snape sees Harry in a new light, and I've read quite a lot of abused Harry fanfics; it's nice to see a new take on it as well! I absolutely love Lily as well. I can't wait to see where you're going with this!

    Also, I'm so glad you're husband is okay! I hope he recovers quickly. And no worries; family and work should always be a priority, so take your time with the story! But I will be eagerly awaiting the next update :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the sweet words about the hubby - I'm SO glad to say that he is recovering well, though definitely not fast enough for his taste, lol. He had surgery a week ago and wants to be back up to speed, like, yesterday. But he's getting better every day. :) I'm also so pleased that you're liking the story!! It's been such a pleasure to write, and I can't tell you how much I love the fact that people are enjoying it as much as I am. There's been a few haters, but you can't please everyone, and I wouldn't change a thing. Because DAMMIT, Snape deserves a little bit of happiness!! lol. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 14 20 Mar 2016 9:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I can see how hard it was for you to write this chapter but I'm sure it's necessary thank you again for a wonderful story

    Author's Response: Awww, thanks for reaching out. I'm SO happy that you're liking the story!! :)
Title: Chapter 13 18 Mar 2016 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your Lily.

    Author's Response: I like YOU!! :)
Title: Chapter 14 18 Mar 2016 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev....

    Author's Response: I know, right? Don't you just want to reach out and hug him, even if he'd hex you for doing it? lol :}

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