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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
Author's Response: Gaw, thanks. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I hope you enjoy the rest, as well.
Harry was so sweet in this chapter. Jilly is so cute. I am very much enjoying this chapter and story. Thanks so much for all the awesome updates! Author's Response: Honestly, if Snape would just STAY STILL and rest (hard to do with Harry on the loose, and wouldn't you know that dammit, Snape actually cares), then his injuries would heal within a day or two. And he's never really been one to ask for help, even when he's really suffering. Poor guy just doesn't like relying on anyone but himself (and if he was really honest with himself, he may tell you that he doesn;t think he deserves the help...) I'm SO glad you're enjoying Lily! I think she's great, too. I can't wait to see her push Snape around a little more - he seems to need it. :)
Author's Response: I know, right?! It was just TOO good. I had to!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! There's definitely a lot of emotion that the poor guy has to sort out. I'm looking forward to writing it. Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Lol, I'm SO sorry, but I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story! I posted a bunch of chapters all at once today. I hope that makes up for it!
Author's Response: "Ack Sacrablur"... OMG that made me laugh!!! I'm sorry to do that to you. I will be updating momentarily with lots more chapters. I hope that makes up for it!! :)
Muah ha ha, I loved the moment when Snape appeared. Harry's heart must of dropped. I LOVED your descriptions and characterizations. Poor Snape being so injured though! He's going through a lot to try to get to Harry! So much pain shows even more dedication. So shocking to meet Lilith for Harry AND Snape. I love her though, she is exactly what needs to enter Snape's life, I think. Harry's too. Great chapter! Author's Response: I almost didn't go with Lily, to be honest. I know people out there really despise OCs. But I just couldn't get her out of my head... She's a charmer, that Lily. And she's definitely not afraid to put Snape in his place. :} I'm glad you like her as much as I do!!
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
Author's Response: Poor Harry isn't sure how to deal with his emotions. He's never exactly had a healthy adult to emulate (with the exception of Dumbledore, who's end goal has always been "The Greater Good" and not Harry himself, so in my opinion that doesn't count.) Thank you for the review! :) |
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