Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 16 Mar 2016 1:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good descriptive writing thank you

    Author's Response: Gaw, thanks. :)
Title: Prologue 16 Mar 2016 1:48 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Much improved scene in the office thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) I hope you enjoy the rest, as well.
Title: Chapter 9 16 Mar 2016 7:04 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love her, I absolutely love her. Snape needs someone who can stand up to him and hold her own. He can be such a mess sometimes. Hehehe of course the fact that she is a Muggle and he can't explain potions and magical transportation leaves him in a bind. I'm sure he can go and get his injures taken care of magically. I wonder why he doesn't visit Madame Pomfrey or St Mungo's.

    Harry was so sweet in this chapter. Jilly is so cute. I am very much enjoying this chapter and story. Thanks so much for all the awesome updates!

    Author's Response: Honestly, if Snape would just STAY STILL and rest (hard to do with Harry on the loose, and wouldn't you know that dammit, Snape actually cares), then his injuries would heal within a day or two. And he's never really been one to ask for help, even when he's really suffering. Poor guy just doesn't like relying on anyone but himself (and if he was really honest with himself, he may tell you that he doesn;t think he deserves the help...) I'm SO glad you're enjoying Lily! I think she's great, too. I can't wait to see her push Snape around a little more - he seems to need it. :)
Title: Chapter 13 16 Mar 2016 3:21 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus and A WEASLEY?! Haha love it!

    Author's Response: I know, right?! It was just TOO good. I had to!! :)
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far! I'm really enjoying it. I like how Snape isn't friendly and nice overnight. I like the slow progression of their relationship and I look forwarding to reading more on what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you so very much! There's definitely a lot of emotion that the poor guy has to sort out. I'm looking forward to writing it. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 3:09 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    What is happening oh my god I need an update

    Author's Response: Lol, I'm SO sorry, but I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story! I posted a bunch of chapters all at once today. I hope that makes up for it!
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 10:58 am
Reviewer: victoria (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ack sacrablur thats not fair this is amazing you cant just leave it like that i demand an update only if its ok with you mind its just really good.

    Author's Response: "Ack Sacrablur"... OMG that made me laugh!!! I'm sorry to do that to you. I will be updating momentarily with lots more chapters. I hope that makes up for it!! :)
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 8:29 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    The use of accidental magic was awesome. It is so much like Harry to risk his life and safety to save a little girl. I hate to think about what would have happened to Harry if his magic didn't kick in and apparate him and the little girl to safety.

    Muah ha ha, I loved the moment when Snape appeared. Harry's heart must of dropped. I LOVED your descriptions and characterizations.

    Poor Snape being so injured though! He's going through a lot to try to get to Harry! So much pain shows even more dedication.

    So shocking to meet Lilith for Harry AND Snape. I love her though, she is exactly what needs to enter Snape's life, I think. Harry's too. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: I almost didn't go with Lily, to be honest. I know people out there really despise OCs. But I just couldn't get her out of my head... She's a charmer, that Lily. And she's definitely not afraid to put Snape in his place. :} I'm glad you like her as much as I do!!
Title: Chapter 8 15 Mar 2016 7:22 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
Title: Chapter 7 15 Mar 2016 3:51 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an accident waiting to happen. Harry is still on edge after being assaulted. He isn't sure what is going on with Snape. Meanwhile Severus is trying to change his viewpoint of Harry while he is in pain from his broken rib. Too bad Harry took off though.

    Author's Response: Poor Harry isn't sure how to deal with his emotions. He's never exactly had a healthy adult to emulate (with the exception of Dumbledore, who's end goal has always been "The Greater Good" and not Harry himself, so in my opinion that doesn't count.) Thank you for the review! :)

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