Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 6 15 Mar 2016 3:41 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see the two of them tentatively getting along. I also found the description of the potions lab and Snape's way of hiding it interesting.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Without saying too much, his way of hiding it is important and comes back later in the story... Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 5 15 Mar 2016 3:29 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wondered when Snape would take care of Harry's injuries. Shower first, then the potions and finally bed. Harry must think the world is spinning off his axis.

    Author's Response: lol, That's a very good way of putting it. I think Harry must think he's in an episode of "The Twilight Zone", at this point... ;) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 4 15 Mar 2016 3:24 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He has had a rotten day and now Snape is grilling him. Though it sounds like Severus is reeling himself after having all his beliefs about Harry shattered. That won't be easy for him to accept.

    Author's Response: Snape was definitely NOT expecting what happened. I think it's knocked him off balance, to say the least. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 3 15 Mar 2016 2:45 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus took Harry to Spinners End. He probably isn't thrilled at the idea but Snape isn't one to shirk his duty. Now if Harry will just be willing to trust him.

    Author's Response: The thought of entering Spinner's End induced a full-fledged panic attack for Harry. I'm sure it was also in part of what just happened to him, but still... The poor kid just can't catch a break!
Title: Chapter 2 15 Mar 2016 2:38 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape must have been shocked at the turn of events. He may have tried to validate his feelings about Harry's beating by thinking that he had gotten worse from his father but this will be impossible to overlook. I am kind of surprised that Dudley would be willing to have that kind of contact with his freaky cousin.

    Author's Response: Dudley is definitely twisted. If he wasn't such an evil brute, I'd actually feel sorry for him. I don't want to give away too much, but let's just say that it stems from his home life.
Title: Chapter 1 15 Mar 2016 2:30 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it doesn't seem like anyone tried to help Harry recover from the loss of Sirius since Dumbledore. The Dursleys don't care. Though I wonder if Minerva saw them abusing Harry. I'm not sure she would have managed to keep from hexing them if she had.

    Author's Response: In my way of thinking, Minerva didn't see Harry at all that morning because he was probably too busy doing slave work - sorry, CHORES - inside the house. I'm sure after the Dursley's had him cook their breakfast, he was probably tasked with doing the dishes, cleaning the kitchen, mopping the floor, buffing the stainless steel appliances, vacuuming the living room, scrubbing the toilets, pruning the rose bushes in the back garden... You get the idea. :} Poor Harry - he's the definition of "cheap child labor". Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 7 15 Mar 2016 1:40 am
Reviewer: Hilary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm loving this story so far! You've done a good job keeping everyone in character, and the plot is compelling. I can't wait to find out where Harry went. I hope Snape finds him before anyone bad does!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Title: Prologue 14 Mar 2016 9:02 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Harry needs to work through this loss. Hitting Snape and destroying Dumbledore's office may have briefly felt good but he needs to talk to someone about it. Definitely not Snape though.

    Author's Response: I know, poor Harry... Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 7:19 pm
Reviewer: victoria (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is so good please update again soon i really want to find out what happens next.

    Author's Response: You got it, my friend!! :) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape may feel like he wants Harry "back where he belongs", but Snape sure doesn't know how to treat him.

    He tells Harry that he was "weeping pathetically", he disciplines Harry because Harry was in a hurry to help Snape, he tells Harry that the Order "doesn't know what to do with Harry", then he tells Harry that what happened with Dudley was basically his fault.

    Way to make the abused child feel welcome, Snape.

    Author's Response: I know, he can be quite the bastard ('scuse my French). But although Snape may think he's got it all under control, he's very close to losing it (as we shall soon see...) Poor Snape. He's just as messed up as Harry, maybe even more so...

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