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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much!! I'm really enjoying exploring this version of Snape. I'm glad you like it!!
Author's Response: Gaw, thanks so much!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I can't wait to share more. :)
Having Snape be injured adds a level and measure of drama and worry. Harry really is vulnerable without his wand, and Snape knows exactly what could happen to him if the Death Eaters catch him. So scary! I loved Snape's worry and panic here. It was really cool to see the flurry of magic in the kitchen in the beginning of this chapter. Very imaginative. I loved reading the conversation between Dumbledore and Snape. Interesting that Snape would keep Harry's secret shame from Dumbledore; I wonder at his reasons. it seems like there are hints that perhaps Snape had experienced it himself. Great chapter. I really enjoyed Harry's characterization, being a troubled teenager, but still a good kid. Snape is such a troubled and complex character as well. You handled him very well in this chapter. I am really loving the story! Author's Response: I think that in that moment right before Harry disappeared out the door, Snape realized what a prat he was being to the poor kid. Snape's viciousness is his go-to self-defense when he feels that someone is getting too close. Unfortunately Harry has a way of worming into people's hearts, which Snape was definitely not ready for. The parallels he draws from Harry's home life make it even worse for him. He's definitely (unintentionally) started the domino effect, which he wouldn't be able to stop even if he wanted to. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much!! :)
Author's Response: Yes, it was. I try not to get to detailed about it since this story - and sexual abuse for that matter - is not truly about sex. It's more about the struggle for power over someone weaker than themselves, and Dudley has definitely become a twisted character throughout his childhood. This is my first ever FanFic, so I apologize for not thinking to add a warning. I will do that now. Thank you for the review!
I love how realistic you've kept Snape and Harry. I love the humour too, that you've injected into the seriousness of the situation. Good job. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!!
This gets more horrible. Get him too Snape! Get them all!!! Love this story. Author's Response: Thank you SO much!! I'm THRILLED that you like it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
That bitch Hope that horse-faced witch gets what she deserves. Hope they both do. Go Snape!! Love this story! Author's Response: Oooo just you wait, my friend. I have very large plans for the Dursley horror show!! Just you wait... Thank you for the review! |
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