Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 2:22 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    OH that last line killed me. The feels! You write such a cold Snape, and I love it.

    Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much!! I'm really enjoying exploring this version of Snape. I'm glad you like it!!
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 1:54 pm
Reviewer: Abie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really riveting, well written story. Everyone is so perfectly in character. I eagerly await an update.

    Author's Response: Gaw, thanks so much!! :)
Title: Prologue 14 Mar 2016 7:29 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for sharing with us! I'm really enjoying the set up of this story, can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I can't wait to share more. :)
Title: Chapter 7 14 Mar 2016 7:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Fantastic chapter! I love how panicked Snape was when Harry left. Snape was really being such a jerk to him. :( So sad that Snape has to revert like that, I'm not surprised that Harry left.

    Having Snape be injured adds a level and measure of drama and worry. Harry really is vulnerable without his wand, and Snape knows exactly what could happen to him if the Death Eaters catch him. So scary!

    I loved Snape's worry and panic here.

    It was really cool to see the flurry of magic in the kitchen in the beginning of this chapter. Very imaginative.

    I loved reading the conversation between Dumbledore and Snape. Interesting that Snape would keep Harry's secret shame from Dumbledore; I wonder at his reasons. it seems like there are hints that perhaps Snape had experienced it himself.

    Great chapter. I really enjoyed Harry's characterization, being a troubled teenager, but still a good kid.

    Snape is such a troubled and complex character as well. You handled him very well in this chapter. I am really loving the story!

    Author's Response: I think that in that moment right before Harry disappeared out the door, Snape realized what a prat he was being to the poor kid. Snape's viciousness is his go-to self-defense when he feels that someone is getting too close. Unfortunately Harry has a way of worming into people's hearts, which Snape was definitely not ready for. The parallels he draws from Harry's home life make it even worse for him. He's definitely (unintentionally) started the domino effect, which he wouldn't be able to stop even if he wanted to. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 6 14 Mar 2016 3:09 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent!!!!! How fun to find a new Severitus. Well written.

    Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much!! :)
Title: Chapter 3 13 Mar 2016 10:11 pm
Reviewer: Livia Ethelind (Signed) [Report This]
    Question! Is what Dudley is about to do to Harry in anyway sexual? Because I don't really feel like it came under violence but I definetly feel that should have had a warning.

    Author's Response: Yes, it was. I try not to get to detailed about it since this story - and sexual abuse for that matter - is not truly about sex. It's more about the struggle for power over someone weaker than themselves, and Dudley has definitely become a twisted character throughout his childhood. This is my first ever FanFic, so I apologize for not thinking to add a warning. I will do that now. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 3 13 Mar 2016 9:56 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving this story!

    I love how realistic you've kept Snape and Harry.

    I love the humour too, that you've injected into the seriousness of the situation.

    Good job.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!!
Title: Chapter 2 13 Mar 2016 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!
    This gets more horrible.

    Get him too Snape! Get them all!!!

    Love this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you SO much!! I'm THRILLED that you like it. :)
Title: Prologue 13 Mar 2016 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Livia Ethelind (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice pace!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Mar 2016 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!
    That bitch
    Hope that horse-faced witch gets what she deserves. Hope they both do.

    Go Snape!!
    Love this story!

    Author's Response: Oooo just you wait, my friend. I have very large plans for the Dursley horror show!! Just you wait... Thank you for the review!

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