Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2 13 Mar 2016 12:49 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! I can't wait for the next chapter

    Author's Response: Squeeeee!! Me too!! I'm like a woman possessed - it's kind of pathetic, actually, lol.
Title: Chapter 1 13 Mar 2016 12:44 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so tense and angsty, I can't wait to see how you spun it into a severitus!

    Author's Response: Oooo, tense and angsty - my favorite!! (I'm a sick, twisted loon, lol.) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 2 13 Mar 2016 12:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    HOLY COW! What a dramatic and unexpected turn of events! Harry just can't catch a break, can he? What terrible consequences for leaving the "safety" of his home. His cousin is such a creep! Such a sicko. I wonder what made him that way and what other kind of trouble he'd been getting into. Harry is so much better than him, what a contrast of their characters.

    I was glad that Petunia at least got a stinging hex sent her way. The Dursleys are so despicable! Well done portraying them. Severus had a lot of restraint having to hear and see them.

    I could definitely see Harry just leaving his house though, not being able to stand his relatives one moment more. I was so surprised that Dudley found him first - I thought for sure it would of been Snape by just the "Potter" in the tunnel at first.

    What a creep Dudley is. Yuck! You definitely have me worried about Harry. And when Snape met Harry's eyes - what a cliffhanger!

    Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry can't catch a break. He is continually getting the ish end of the stick in life, but that's what makes him such an amazing character, in my opinion. His ability to forgive and continually love even through his circumstances is such a gift! I hope all turns out well for him... We'll just have to see. Thank you for the review!
Title: Prologue 13 Mar 2016 12:37 pm
Reviewer: Lyza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am very excited To read more of this fic!

    Author's Response: I'm excited to share more with you!! Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Mar 2016 12:33 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh, poor Harry. I wonder if it was Snape who made the hose water turn on and wet Harry, prompting him to drink. What an awful time he is having at the Dursley's! What jerks they are being to him! I am so glad that Snape is getting a good, real look at what Harry's home life is like though. Harry is such a hard worker! And it is amazing that he can keep his cool, but I expect that physical punishments for acting out or talking back has trained him not too. I bet that is why Harry feels so free to talk back and act out at school, because the consequences aren't as bad.

    I loved that Minerva was watching Harry first. I wonder what she noticed, if anything. I suppose maybe she didn't notice much since she had the early morning watch. Great start to the story! I looks very promising! The chapter was short, but had a great pace setting things up and introducing us to the theme of the story. I couldn't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: It was Snape!! :) I wanted it to be kind of ambiguous though, so I'm glad you weren't sure. I mean, Heaven forbid that he show that he might actually CARE. ;) Thank you for the review, my friend!! I wouldn't be here on this amazing website if it wasn't for you!
Title: Prologue 13 Mar 2016 12:27 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great drama! Way to get the depth of Harry's emotions and feelings. I didn't feel like the books had done it justice, but you did. :) Snape being there added so much more drama, it was almost painful to watch Harry go through it. it was good to hear all of what Snape did, things that were not really said outright in the books. I do love how much influence and power Dumbledore has over Snape though, you can tell that Snape respects and listens to him. I loved all the explanations; if only Harry had known before hand, the mess would of been avoided! So who else is Kreacher serving? Bellatrix? Narcissa and Lucius?

    Author's Response: Muhahaha, wait and see my friend... *Rubs hands together evilly* lol, Thank you for the review!

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