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Reviews For Right in Front of Me (Book 1)
Author's Response: Squeeeee!! Me too!! I'm like a woman possessed - it's kind of pathetic, actually, lol.
Author's Response: Oooo, tense and angsty - my favorite!! (I'm a sick, twisted loon, lol.) Thank you for the review!
I was glad that Petunia at least got a stinging hex sent her way. The Dursleys are so despicable! Well done portraying them. Severus had a lot of restraint having to hear and see them. I could definitely see Harry just leaving his house though, not being able to stand his relatives one moment more. I was so surprised that Dudley found him first - I thought for sure it would of been Snape by just the "Potter" in the tunnel at first. What a creep Dudley is. Yuck! You definitely have me worried about Harry. And when Snape met Harry's eyes - what a cliffhanger! Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry can't catch a break. He is continually getting the ish end of the stick in life, but that's what makes him such an amazing character, in my opinion. His ability to forgive and continually love even through his circumstances is such a gift! I hope all turns out well for him... We'll just have to see. Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: I'm excited to share more with you!! Thank you for the review!
I loved that Minerva was watching Harry first. I wonder what she noticed, if anything. I suppose maybe she didn't notice much since she had the early morning watch. Great start to the story! I looks very promising! The chapter was short, but had a great pace setting things up and introducing us to the theme of the story. I couldn't wait to read more! Author's Response: It was Snape!! :) I wanted it to be kind of ambiguous though, so I'm glad you weren't sure. I mean, Heaven forbid that he show that he might actually CARE. ;) Thank you for the review, my friend!! I wouldn't be here on this amazing website if it wasn't for you!
Author's Response: Muhahaha, wait and see my friend... *Rubs hands together evilly* lol, Thank you for the review! |
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