That was a sad chapter. You did a nice job capturing Albus' despair. Having a horcrux on him every day would have been enough to drive even Dumbledore round the bend with out the added misery of Harry and Severus' situation.
I wish this story had a movie deal
What a wonderful story, thank you!
Woah! That was incredible! I didn't even think that Dumbledore must of seen some nightmarish vision when he went to kill the ring, just like Harry and Ron saw when they killed the locket. What a dramatic scene! I wonder what it was that gave Dumbledore the strength to bring the sword down; was it Severus' pain, reminding him that he had to protect Harry?
I am glad that Snape has remembered, or realized that Dumbledore is like a father to him, that they all need his guidance. It seemed like a near thing, the temptations Severus had to face in order to fight. Wow.
And poor Harry, having found Dumbledore like that. I wonder if they managed to stop the curse in time, if Dumbledore will still die from the curse if he doesn't get Advadra Kedavra'd first.
I am glad that Dumbledore didn't commit suicide though, they need him to be strong even if he has made mistakes and feels guilty. They still love and look up to him.
Fantastic story, I enjoyed the chapter. Thank you so much for taking the time to write and share it with us!
Will you be updating soon? I know you were out of town, but I'm still
So very interested with what is going to happen.
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| 04 Aug 2016 8:34 pm
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What a cliffie! Thank you an amazing chapter very intense and dramatic. You almost made me pity Dumbledore and I can't stand him!
| Title: Chapter 32
| 04 Aug 2016 8:21 pm
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Lovely chapter I love a bit of family calm after all the angst! Thank you so much
wondering if the ring is feeling into his emotion.. love the emotional that was flying off of severus..
Ahhhh!!!! No! Well I guess better Dumbledore have a withered hand than commit suicide. :/ If the ring is still cursed, I mean. The shock of the curse might shock him and he still might plummet to his death. I bet the ring is causing a lot of Dumbledore's despair, just like the locket did with Harry in the seventh book. I think if Dumbledore had committed suicide that Snape would of felt guilty. I wonder if Dumbledore was the anonymous source to the Muggle newspaper. Fantastic chapter, I was so happy to see another update so soon! Thank you for it!
Author's Response: You nailed it!! ;) I was hoping that this chapter wasn't too ambiguous. But yes, Dumbledore already felt guilty after seeing Sev and Harry so beaten and bloodied. And yes, the ring was indeed causing his level of despair to reach suicidal heights. I was never satisfied with the simple explanation that he, "Lost his head." He is such a great wizard that I was determined to flesh out the story a bit. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! :) Thank you for the review.
Love this story. You are dealing very well, with such a delicate subject matter. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a sweet compliment!! Although deep subjects like this fascinate me, it's not the morbid details themselves that interest me - it's how people interact with others after the fact. I know it is a delicate balance between exploring the psychology of a person and just being perverse. So thank you for reaching out and letting me know that I'm doing a good job!! I appreciate it more than you know!!
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