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Reviews For Learning Home
It's going to be a tough haul for both him and Snape. I bet it will be for the better though, and now Harry will be able to go to different places he never went to before. Too bad they didn't send all his toys along. I don't see Snape singing to Harry to wake him up, but maybe he'll end up surprising us eventually. :) Oh poor kid. Fantastic start, you're doing a great job with all the characters being in character while exploring this new premise. Thanks for writing and sharing! Please update when you can!
Fantastic buildup of Harry's background in this chapter. The poor kid never learned how to play with other kids, how to manage his own emotions, how to question things. He had been coddled and spoiled for sure, but I think he is still a good kid. It didn't seem like he tried to get to mischief. But having only caretakers he liked is going to be a problem once he meets Snape. I wonder if Julie and Mitchell are going to be able to visit or write to Harry. In a way, they have been his most consistent parents. What a mess Harry's life and upbringing has been so far. I wonder what it would of been like if Harry grew at Home until he went to Hogwarts, and if he had to return there every summer. Fantastic start! Author's Response: Jan! I have to confess, I had not considered keeping Julie or Mitchell in the story. As soon as I read your comment I realized what a mistake that would have been. Thank you! You will be seeing at least one of them again. Glad you enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Snape himself is a fairly harsh man in canon, and I will try to stay true to that side of him. However, I anticipate that there will be a bit of leniency... well, Snape leniency! Thank you.
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