| Title: The Second-hand Cleansweep Three
| 03 Oct 2016 2:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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Sorry to see that this doesn't go on. You say it doesn't have much in the way of plot, but I find myself absolutely in love with Serafima Snape as a character. And you're right at the impact of the gender reversal here: it does make it seem abruptly as though there are no men in the world, or at the least no men who are important; and that does make for quite the indictment on the original.
So many stories are made with the male perspective in mind that this is actually a very interesting take, and I'd love to read more of it. I understand it was an experiment and you may be through with it, but I have really enjoyed it so far!
-K
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