Oh, god, they would DIE if either of them called adult Snape 'Sevy' to his face. :P :P
Another enjoyable chapter. I think the nicknames are good - I certainly can't think of better ones. I look forward to the next chapter and learning whether the deaging has taken care of Remus' furry little problem. Please update soon!
Author's Response: I just added a new chapter this morning, so great timing! I had the same thing about nicknames, they're not perfect but they're the best I could think up. And the new chapter definitely talks about Remus' furry problem, although it'll be discussed in more depth later on. Thanks for the review!
I'm surprised that Malfoy didn't object to diaper changing. I wonder if they will be assigned a house elf to give them a hand occasionally? Harry and Draco will probably need time for homework and other school projects.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I initially had added a part where Draco objected to doing 'servant stuff' like changing and feeding a baby, since my hc is that house elves raise pureblood babies (kind of like nannies, just a lot more badly treated). It ended up being a little stiff, though, so I wrote it this way. Draco /is/ going to complain about it later, but right now he's still in shock and trying to come to terms with the fact that his parent-figure has been turned into a baby.
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| 03 Mar 2017 8:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sevy sounds OK but not Remy but can't think of anything else at the moment. Thank you a good chapter
Author's Response: I had the same thought, to be honest. 'Sev' or 'Sevy' is okay for baby Severus, but I got stuck on trying to find a nickname for Remus. 'Remy' was the best I could come up with at the time, so that's why it stuck for now. Thanks for the review!
Love it! Can't wait for more
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