This was intriguing, suspenseful, and simply beautiful. Thanks for your story.
Title: Chapter 6
| 20 Jun 2017 10:15 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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*crying* This was BEAUTIFUL!! Oh God, I don't even have words for it! Thank you, thank you, thank you for this lovely story! I swear you made my heart ache with Severus and Harry million times. I love happy endings!
I couldn't imagine them not hugging after having been so close and through so long a separation. At least after seeing him on the horse, Harry can believe that Sev will get better and not blame himself for the capture. You had a typo - "And then Harry would have to reign Penny in..." It should be rein. To rein in something actually comes from the riding term of reining in a horse or horses. Rein in and reign over. Hope you don't mind the correction - I worked for a newspaper too many years.
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